September 4,
2016AuthorBy Sunday Fiction.Posted
in Photo Fiction.
The idea of Sunday Photo Fiction is
to create a story / poem or something using around about 200 words with the
photo as a guide. Please try to keep it as close to the 200 words as possible.
It doesn’t have to be centre stage in the story, I have seen some where the
placement is so subtle, the writer states where it is.
The main object is to have fun.
Here
is the link if you want to join in.
https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2016/09/04/sunday-photo-fiction-september-4th-2016/
HOPE
‘There is hope,’ he said as he
embraced her, enfolding her body into his arms, gently squeezing her against
his chest. She inhaled his smell, the
roughness of his tweed jacket, she felt his heartbeat, steady and strong.
Not for us, she thought. I don’t want this anymore. How can I tell him it’s over? I’ve got to move on. I’ve got to flow strong
like a river, pushing past barriers and gates.
Taking the sludge and slurry of my life, dumping it, leaving all the
negativity behind.
‘We will get through this,’ he
murmured into her ear. ‘We will.’
His strength and determination
had got them through a lot in their life together but 25 years later, the kids
had left. They had their own lives and
only visited when they wanted something, usually money.
He gave in to them. He bailed them out many, many times.
Now she needed to persuade him
that she was moving on. She would invite
him to join her on this journey. She wasn’t
hopeful he would. She couldn’t see him upping sticks, leaving it all behind, the
comfort and security but she hoped against hope that he would.
He did.
Great intelligent take on the prompt. Love the ending too
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story, I totally recognize the situation!
ReplyDeletePowerful metaphor!
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing how transitional moments creep up on you in different life stages. Glad he stuck with her, sign of a good marriage.
ReplyDeleteGlad he decided to go with her. Good story.
ReplyDeleteCute story and realistic. I was happy he wen with HR on this new journey. She seemed to really want him too but I know she would've done it alone.
ReplyDeleteWell written.
A unique take on the prompt and an enjoyable story
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