AuthorBy Sunday Fiction
Posted in Photo Fiction
The idea of Sunday Photo Fiction is
to create a story / poem or something using around about 200 words with the
photo as a guide. Please try to keep it as close to the 200 words as possible.
It doesn’t have to be centre stage in the story, I have seen some where the
placement is so subtle, the writer states where it is.
Once you have written and posted your
story, please add the link to the inlinkz froggy icon below and add it to the
collection so we can all have a read. Click on the links above. The main object
is to have fun.
TOO OLD
War is here again.
Mary wept her heart out when she
heard the news. She was too old to go
through this again. She worried about
her children, her grandchildren and her great-grandchildren.
Would they survive?
Would any of them survive?
How did the talks break
down?
So many questions she had.
If she could she would bang the leaders’
heads together. She would give them a
right old talking to. This was the
trouble these days – the leaders were all men.
Now if there were women in charge things would never have become this
dire. It would have been stopped before
it started.
Mothers and wives know how to
step in and diffuse situations before they erupt in to such violence.
Violence doesn’t solve
anything.
Nobody would listen to her
now.
The carers in the home thought
she was a sweet old lady who wouldn’t say ‘boo’ to a goose, little did they
know what she did or what she was capable of.
The subterfuge, the lies, the heart-stopping moments when she thought
she might be caught. On many occasions
she had saved the day.
She was still bound by the
Official Secrets Act.
Word count: 197
A friend of my parents was once a spy. His degree was in geology, so he traveled to all kinds of foreign countries doing whatever geologists do. And spying. He wouldn't say boo to a goose either. It makes you wonder who else is a spy.
ReplyDeleteI would love to know more of Mary's story.
ReplyDeleteThat's awesome. I love it.
ReplyDeleteGreat voice.
ReplyDeleteSuperb! I loved loved this story.
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