Tuesday, 11 November 2014



•Use the photo(s) and prompt provided to write a 500-word story; all elements of the prompt must be a feature in the brief story you create. We aren’t counting, but for the fairness of the readers please, no 1000+ word entries.

•If it is a two-photo prompt, the two photos must be visible in your story. If it’s the 1 photo/5 words prompt, the photo and 5 words MUST be clearly referenced in your story. Variations on a word are allowed within reason (for example: adding s, ed, ing to the word to be grammatically correct); but creating a new, unrelated, word is not. (To see an example of a “1 photo/5 word” story see Faith, Hope, Love, and Pink by one of our hostesses, Debb Stanton.)

•Photos are the property of the hostess for the week, unless otherwise mentioned. Please Do Not share photos and/or prompt words as your own.

•In order to honor the community-purpose of the blog hop, we ask that you please reference the blog hop (not one of the hostesses) in your post so your blog audience and the blog hop community may all be connected.

•Link your story through the blue froggy at the bottom by the following Tuesday (direct link to story, not your whole blog, please).


Without further delay, here are the new prompts:



Sleep was eluding Helen yet again.  She looked at her radio alarm clock, the digital display was reading 4.00 a.m.  She had tossed and turned for the last few nights, yes she had things on her mind, she had decisions to make, huge, life changing decisions that would make or break her.

She looked at the restful sleeping body beside her.  Nothing ever seemed to bother Ron, he was snoring gently, his chest rising and falling steadily, oblivious to her cares, to her woes and was a typical male (in her mind) who was able to compartmentalise things.  So he would put something in a drawer, close it and file it away to be dealt with at the appropriate time. 

It was no good; she would have to get up.  As gently and quietly as she could Helen rose from the bed, although she did wonder why she bothered to be quiet, Ron could and did sleep through hurricanes, nothing would wake him until he had had his normal sleep cycle.  Even 30 years ago no babies screaming their heads off in the middle of the night would awaken him.  He always rose fresh and able to tackle a day’s work. 

She let herself quietly out of the door and wrapped her thick woolly cardigan around her and trudged down to the road and slowly jogged to the beach.  She sat on a boulder and waited for the sun to rise.

She was always amazed at the sight she saw, the sun rising over the horizon, the colours imbuing the sky and sea and land with so much hope that she always felt invigorated and revitalised making all her night time worries melt away into insignificant petty nuisances.
Sitting there enjoying these moments Helen realised that she had made her decision and now all she had to do was to tell Ron and see what his reaction was.

Back in the shelter of her cosy kitchen she made the tea and put a couple of slices of bread into the toaster.   Buttering her warm slices she ate slowly while she pondered on the best way to break the news to her husband.

Helen entered the bedroom with a cup of tea for Ron and one for herself just as the alarm went off.  Ron stirred and she turned off the intrusive beeping of the alarm.  She passed him his cup of tea and straightened the heirloom quilted cover over the bed. 

She stroked the material feeling every loving stitch her grandmother had sewn and started to speak.  Ron put his hand over hers and smiled at her encouragingly.   She told him she would go into the hospice when the time came.  She didn't want to be a burden to him or to their children. 

Ron nodded and pulled her into his arms, holding her tightly, he whispered those three words she always longed to hear that he usually found so difficult to say.  ‘I love you.’

Word count: 496


  1. What a beautiful story. I loved the part about the woolly sweater and the sky and the sea and how you described the sunrise. I also thought the hospice part was meaningful. Thank you Sally. xx oo

  2. Very sweet.

    I slept through a hurricane once...