Writing Prompt for Wednesday Stories 4/12/17
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April
6, 2017
Debb Stanton from Inner Sunshine hosts this creative writing weekly, using photo prompts and random words or a combination of both. If you want to join in the fun please click on Wednesday Stories below.
In 600 words or less, please write
about this photo and use all 10
words:
principal, kite, asylum, loaf, committee,
father, cup, athletics, river, station
Here is my story using the prompt:
A Busy Day
Nora answered the telephone,
keeping an eye on the rascal sitting midway up the staircase. He was such a scamp but she couldn’t live
without him.
‘Hi dad.’
‘Nora,’ boomed her father’s sonorous voice.
‘I need you to pick me up from the station. My
train arrives at 6.30p.m. then I’ll need a lift to the River Room
at the Conningbrooke Hotel.’
Nora checked the calendar on her
wall, ‘dad, I can’t do it, I’ve got a committee meeting myself tonight.’
Well how rude and typical Nora
thought as she heard his mobile click off in disgust. How can a mechanical object sound
disgusted? She laughed at herself for
that notion.
Scamp was still sitting on her
stairs, he’d better not be moulting, she didn’t want white hairs all over the
freshly painted staircase. Her cleaner
would have a fit when she came in on Monday morning. Ana was a godsend, a brilliant find but when
Nora found out what a life she’d had she was happy to give her a job. She came over from one of the Eastern
European countries a few years ago as an asylum seeker to
gain a meaningful life. In actual fact
she had a brilliant mind and was a leading academic professor in a posh
university before things became so bad that she and her family fled for their
lives.
One of the principal reasons
Ana told Nora that they braved the horrific journey was so that her and her
husband could give their children a better life. They thought England would be the best place
to do it as they were already fluent in the language. They had considered the USA but thought a
smaller country might be friendlier.
The phone rang again. It was turning in to a busy day. Nora smiled as she recognised the caller ID,
her sister, Ivy.
‘Nora, I’ve come up with this
brilliant idea,’ gushed Ivy. ‘We can
have a kite flying competition for the kids at the athletics club. We could
make it a fun day with lots of other activities and get all the kids involved,
not just the members. We could give
prizes for the best design, they highest flight, the longest flight.’
Nora tried to interrupt her
sister, she was worried she wasn’t breathing.
‘Take a breath, dear.’
Ivy carried on with her idea, all
fired up with enthusiasm. One thing you
could say about Ivy and her husband Ted, they may not have any children of
their own but they loved being around young people and bringing out their
potential.
After that flurry of activity
Nora felt the need for a sit down and a cup of tea. She might even have a slice of currant loaf, after
all it was nearly eleven o’clock.
Scamp came running down the
stairs, bounded into the kitchen and sat at her feet, a beseeching look on his
face. He’d heard the wrapper being
opened on the cake and was waiting expectantly for a crumb or two to fall on to
the kitchen floor.
Nora’s mobile phone pinged with a
message from her dad. Brusque and to the
point as always, he was going to get a taxi and make his own way to the
hotel. Nora sighed in exasperation. One day he would realise that she had a life
of her own to lead, she wasn’t a replacement for his wife nor his P.A. She knew he loved her and Ivy in his own way
but both the sisters thought a little more consideration from him would go a
long way.
Word count: 597
Sally,
ReplyDeleteGood job on keeping the writing prompt within the set limit. I don't know if I could do that. This looks like a great writing hop to participate in and perhaps after April I can consider doing something like this. I've always been interested creative writing and have some children's stories written stored away digitally that really need special attention. Thanks for sharing and for visiting today's edition of Art Sketching Through the Alphabet Letter "J". Have a good day!
Hi Sally,
ReplyDeleteI agree with Cathy Kennedy - you always have a unique way of making your stories interesting while sticking to the prompt. I loved this story because I love dogs and am fascinated by their behaviors; I also like to read about how people act, like the father in this story. Thanks for writing it! I hope your friends, like Cathy Kennedy, write with us someday. :)
A day in the life -- this rings so true.
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