100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week#78
http://jfb57.wordpress.com/2013/02/18/100-word-challenge-for-grown-ups-week78/
…what does it taste like…
Add 100 words to the above prompt:
What does it taste like this bottle waiting to be sampled?
A taste that has her tongue quite baffled
On a warm summer’s day sitting at a wooden bench
Her lips are pursed ready to open, swallow and quench
The thirst that is now overcoming the politeness of her grandma
Who insisted that the barman placed inside the bottle a straw
To draw the liquid up softly and gently the first tingle
Hits her tongue, she is oblivious to all the other people
On this warm summer’s day sitting at a wooden table
Her whole face lights up with delight and her eyes sparkle.
That was great! You sure do have a way with words!
ReplyDeleteLovely Sally ..as always! - Thanks for popping by on my birthday :-)
ReplyDeleteWonderful! I love the last line. Kids' eyes really do do that when they experience something fun and new. :)
ReplyDeleteHappy Friday.