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THE DECISION
Liza
had rehearsed what she wanted to say to Darren but didn’t know if she could go
through with it all these hours later.
He was her rock, her love, her second chance but then 18 months wasn't
really very long to know each other. On the other hand, 23 years should have
been enough to know someone and look how that finished. She thought her parents were ‘solid’. She thought nothing could faze them but her
dad broke his marriage vows and it was over, just like that.
Liza
hated all the hype for Valentine’s Day but she wanted to mark the occasion
somehow. It fell on a Friday this year,
so it could be a good start to a romantic weekend. The trouble was she was quite strapped for
cash and couldn’t justify spending money she didn’t have and had no means of
paying back. She’d seen too many of her
friends fight a losing battle with credit cards and she wasn't going
there.
Darren
knew Liza was worried about something.
He thought he knew her quite well after dating her for more than a
year. She liked romantic things and
he’d have to work hard to think of something - as romance he was quite lacking
in. He could buy her roses. He could buy her chocolate. Jewellery would mean something more
significant and he wasn't sure he was ready for that, yet. She didn’t like those huge teddy bears in the
shops with red hearts and all that palaver.
He put his thinking cap on. As he
drove down the High Street he noticed an elderly couple, or should he say a
‘more mature’ couple, sitting outside on the patio of the pub just having a
drink and absorbing the atmosphere. He
had a beer and she had a glass of red wine.
They clinked their glasses together and smiled at each other. They really smiled at each other. That’s what he wanted with Liza.
The
traffic lights turned green and he drove down the long High Street still
thinking and musing how he could become more romantic. He kept thinking about that couple. How long had they been together? They still looked in love. They still looked as if they enjoyed each
other’s company.
Liza
packed up her desk, said cheerio to her colleagues and headed out of the office
to the bus stop. Standing in line under
the shelter, peering through the glass that covered three sides of the
structure leaving one area totally open, she listened to the conversations
around her.
She
boarded her bus, the No.666, (now there’s a number for a bus route), she smiled
at the other seated passengers as she stumbled down the aisle looking for a
seat. The driver obviously needed to get
going quickly, considering his brusque manner when she’d embarked.
Twenty
minutes later Liza descended from the bus and began to walk home. The full moon helped light her way along with
the lamp post shining an ethereal glow on the pavement. As she rounded the corner Darren started to
run towards her. He picked her up and
twirled her round in his arms.
Squealing,
Liza embraced him back, her arms tight around his neck, her legs wrapped around
his waist. He carried her along for a
few steps, as though she was a feather, until he began to gasp. He placed her
on the ground, grabbed her hand and started walking in the opposite direction
of her home.
As
he opened the door of the pub, the lingering smells of a wood fire hit Liza’s
nostrils bringing a sense of the comforts of home. She seated herself by the inglenook as Darren
brought over their drinks. He seemed
nervous to her. A few swallows of the
liquid to quench his thirst or really more to give himself some Dutch courage,
he began to speak.
Liza
mouth was hung open, her eyes wide with astonishment. She was trying to take it all in, he’d been
offered a great opportunity, moving overseas and …. he’d asked her to go with him. Pack in her job (which was pretty mundane and
boring) she’d been thinking about looking for something else anyway but to move
away from her family, friends and everything she knew and held dear, that was
such a big step to take.
Darren
let out the breath he hadn’t realised he’d been holding in while he waited for
some sort of response. Perhaps he’d gone
about this the wrong way. Then Liza gave
him the most dazzling smile he’d ever seen.
She pulled a piece of paper from her handbag.
I’d
move to the moon to be with you
Travel
to the ends of the earth with you
Go
to the bottom of the sea to be with you
Go
to Mars to be with you
Leave
my family to be with you
Make
new friends just to be with you
My
life is nothing without you
My
heart belongs to you
My
soul is blended to you
Three months later, Liza and Darren sat on the aeroplane,
nervous and excited as they started the first leg of their journey to another
life. Darren thought back to the couple
he saw all those weeks ago wondering what they were doing tonight. He looked out of the window as the rain
cleared and the sun broke through the clouds.
I
fancy a steak dinner tonight, said Bill
Let’s
pop out to the Old Mill.
He
still had the ability to surprise her
She
smiled and nodded her answer.
That
would be lovely, no supper to cook
‘A
table for two’ she heard him book
His
voice was still deep and sexy at sixty-two
The
attraction didn’t stop, there was always something new
The
vows she made all those years ago were still strong and true
She
raised her tea cup, gave her husband a saucy wink
He
nodded as his bright blue eyes gave a subtle blink.
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