It's time for our last challenge of 2019 - the subject as above is FOOTPRINTS
Here is my contribution:
Sitting on the bench Albert
watched the horizon. His rheumy eyes
sometimes found it difficult to focus further out or even in, these days. The glasses helped; he was amazed that they
turned dark at the least sign of bright sunshine. The things they could do these days, he knew
there was a name for it trans something – oh no, that was something else – yes,
photogenic. No, that wasn't right
either. Shaking his head, he relaxed his
mind, maybe the word he was searching for would come to him in time. Time was something he had a lot of these
days, although maybe not as much as he wanted.
Sitting on the memorial bench
dedicated in memory of his lovely wife, Eileen, his mind opened like a trailer
for a film. Snapshots of his life, their
life together and now this third transition, his life on his own.
Did he leave enough of a mark for
generations to come to remember him? He
didn’t live through a war. He didn’t
invent a life-saving medical drug. He
didn’t make lots of money, although he earned a decent enough living throughout
his life by working hard and diligently.
His family didn’t go without, they didn’t live in the lap of luxury but
they were happy. He didn’t write a book,
direct a film or become a big film star.
He didn’t paint, sculpt or do anything artistic.
What he did do was love his life,
his family and help anybody whenever he could.
He was lucky to be surrounded by family when so many families became
scattered, dysfunctional or just too busy.
The seagulls squawked their
raucous calls, as he looked up at them whirling around in the blue sky above he
gave thanks to – well he wasn’t sure who he could give thanks to or even if
there was someone/something out there but that was another thought for another
day and another time, probably with the help of a glass of whisky or two. He
laughed quietly to himself, he did enjoy a tipple of an evening.
Oh yes, photochromatic, that’s
what his spectacles had – they changed into sunglasses all by themselves. Amazing.
He heard the clock tower strike
eleven, she was late again but then when was she ever early? That would be her legacy in life, always
rushing but never on time rather like the White Rabbit in Alice in Wonderland –
“I’m late, I’m late! For a very important date!” She had a heart of gold but time-keeping
wasn't in her make-up.
Albert looked
out over his favourite scene. There he
was. His precious godson or as he liked
to think of him, his precious grandson.
Not by blood, not by birth but by bonding. This little boy was the light of his life
and he was so grateful Harry and Louise had come in to his life when they
had. They had enveloped him in their
love, in their family and made his days not as lonely any more.
That
was their legacy, their footprint in time.
They might not aspire or achieve great or notable things in the world
but they would pass on their kindness, love, fortitude, morals and downright
human decency. Albert nodded to himself,
you didn’t have to be famous, have your name known by all and sundry, so long
as those people who were in your life let you love them and they loved you in
return.
Harry
was making his bid for freedom. Look at
him go. Those sturdy little legs
carrying him far away (always in sight of his mother though) – he was full of
life and Albert hoped that would never fade.
The sky
met the sea, the sea met the shingle and Harry’s footprints left a faint mark
which would be washed away by the later tide, borne who knows where, perhaps to
lands far away, perhaps to the depths of the earth. Albert waved at Louise who beamed back at
him, beckoning him to join them on the beach for a cuppa. She’d also have something delicious to treat
him with, perhaps a chocolate muffin if he was lucky.
Yes, he did feel lucky. So lucky. He watched Harry gaze in wonder at
the vista beyond his young eyes. Albert
gazed also in wonder at the scene as he slowly, stiffly, rose from the bench,
blowing a kiss to his love as he moved forward with his life.
FOOTPRINTS
Generations
come and go
Leaving
footprints in the snow
In the sand
Through the
land
Legacies that
live on through others
The sisters and
mothers
The fathers and
brothers
Nephews and
nieces
Cousins and
sundries
Assorted,
blended families
Lay behind love
and loyalty
Hidden depths
take pride of place
As people move
in and out of the human race
Bigotry passes
No more classes
A Utopian dream
Perhaps never
seen
Maybe won’t
ever exist
Word count: 817
The true heroes in life are those who leave a bit of love in the hearts of all whose paths intersect with theirs, right? Lovely story, Sally. Have a wonderful Christmas and a better New Year. :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Sally - this was quite delightful ... I was with Albert on the bench, and then with Harry as he tottered over the shingle towards the gentle sea - good to know his mother was there watching over Harry, but with enough compassion and understanding to include Albert. Yes - Albert will keep going for Harry ... and I loved the poem ... conratulations - cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteBoth story and poem are a gift of gentle, fresh air. Many, many thanks.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sally for this very wise take on life and legacy. The quiet achievements of the many. Enjoyed your poem immensely too. Full of pace and melody.
ReplyDeleteMerry Christmas writing. Hoping to read you in 2020 anew.
Just lovely - a life well-lived!
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ReplyDeleteYour story touched me. It is difficult picking up the pieces when you're the one who has been left behind. It was encouraging to Albert with the will to live and the desire to keep marching forward. That made me very happy.
Have a Merry Christmas and a great crossover into 2020.
Shalom aleichem,
Pat G
This was so lovely and heartfelt. I felt like I was in his head as he struggled to find the right words for things and thought back on his life. It really is true that you don't have to do groundbreaking things to have a lasting impact on the world. I also loved the poem!
ReplyDeleteVery sweet, I too can relate to trouble finding the right word. Getting old isn't for the faint of heart. I'm glad he's found peace. A blessing for sure. Grandchildren do give us hope for the future. Beautiful poem, you captured the prompt nicely.
ReplyDeleteSally, as always, heartwarming and genuine. Love the life well lived aspect and how he watches the next generation continue the kindness he's dispersed in his lifetime. Poignant and precious.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sally for your long-lasting loyalty to RFW and WEP. Love having you write for us when you can. I always look forward to your prose and poems.
Merry Christmas! Happy New Year!
Denise
A story about all of us - not famous but living the best we can, and giving what we can. A warm and wonderful story.
ReplyDeleteHappy holidays, Sally.
That was a wonderful, contemplative, piece. Albert is a lucky man in many ways, and has definitely left his own footprints on others. A really good use of the prompt :)
ReplyDeleteThe salt of the earth. Captured in a gentle, thought provoking and heart warming flash. A lovely take on the prompt. Thank you for sharing it at WEP.
ReplyDeleteWish you a very merry Christmas and a happy and productive New Year 2020.
What a wonderful family, and I wish there were more Alberts in the world. I loved this!
ReplyDeleteFor most of us, the effect we have on the people in our lives is the only thing we truly have to leave behind. It's like they saying that goes something like...no one will remember your accolades, your awards, or your income, but EVERYONE will remember how you treated them.
ReplyDeleteGreat piece. And that moment he recalls the term "photochromatic", that was pretty funny. :-D
A inspiring flash about the legacy of one man, and how his godson will carry on that legacy. Well done and Happy Holidays, Sally.
ReplyDeletePoignant piece, Sally. Wondering what we leave - our legacy - makes Albert so real...so genuine. You capture the sentiments so well with your words and phrases. And mixing up words or losing them, I relate to that - mine's age and illness. Clever use of footprints in both senses. The poem supplies another dimension, although the kid on the beach photo add magic.
ReplyDeleteA great reminder that the best legacy to leave is one of love for those closest to us. Poignant and nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI loved the poem. The flow, the simplicity and the message. That was beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteThat entire paragraph about the legacy and the footprints in time, about the legacy of kindness rather than that of greatness was awesome. It was a superb read!
Sonia
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Beautiful story. And a perfect reminder of what's important: kindness and love for others.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely story. It's very humbling and satisfying. A perfect piece to end one year and start a new one.
ReplyDeleteHi Sally,
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet and caring story. I loved the poem even more... beautifully written! We all go through different stages in our life, and I honestly believe the last one is the hardest one. We lose our partner in life and have to move on alone. At least for this gentlemen he has an extended family looking out for him so he is not living the final stage of his life alone. May that be said for all of us who are in our final stages of life and have to carry on without the love of our lives...
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