Our lovely hosts Denise and
Yolanda who work very hard hosting this bi-monthly challenge
This month is themed for
Halloween. This is not my genre and I struggle
to do anything horror wise so my offering is rather tame compared to other
entries.
Here are the guidelines:
FLASH
FICTION – POETRY -- NON-FICTION – ARTWORK -- PHOTOS
OPEN TO ALL
OPEN TO ALL
For this challenge, share a childhood fright that
might or did turn into an adult fear, real or imagined.
To start the fun you can:
1. share a favourite
frightening tale, movie, novel, photograph or painting that will leave us
quaking in our boots
2. in a short
paragraph describe how it scared you, and why it did and or still does today
3. then you can:
a. submit your own scary piece, 1000
words or less, in any format or
b. share
a photograph or painting that captures the horror you've felt.
Open
to all genres - Fiction works can be - Adult, YA, MG. All entries maximum 1,000
words.
1.
Sharing something that happened in my
middle teens (15/16 years old). I lived
in a small village in the South East of England.
OUIJA
I
had two best friends and we spent time in each other’s houses, girly stuff,
chatting about boys, playing records (yes it was that far back that they were
on vinyl) or listening to pirate radio stations when we could pick them up on
the transistor radios. It was all very
innocent and naive compared to the teenagers of today.
Patsy
and I lived in council houses, I was at one end of a long winding avenue and
she was at the other end, down the hill and nearly out to the main road. Mary lived in a house in the churchyard. Her parents were quite bohemian for village
tastes and they weren't born and bred villagers. It was a huge house and the front door led on
to the path up to the church. The living
room window faced out on to the graveyard.
Situated on a hill the house was divided over three or four floors. The kitchen was in the basement, a large cold
room with a walk-in pantry and a huge wooden table set in the middle of the
flagstone floor.
Mary
had a lot of freedom, Patsy and I thought, being allowed to invite friends over
and go out and about all the time. One evening
we had been talking about spirits and ghosts and had seen something about an Ouija
board. We decided to try it. Mary obtained an Ouija board, I think she
found it in her parent’s book shelves and we decided on a night to try it out.
During
this time there had been some scandal in the village (my memory of the actual
events is rather hazy all these years later) concerning rumours about a certain
chap in the village.
We
prepared the table, candles, an upturned glass in the middle ready to use. We placed our fingers on the glass and in the
semi-dark room started asking questions.
‘Is anybody there?’ The glass
moved to the square marked ‘yes.’
We
shivered in anticipation. After several
more questions, spelling out answers that were true we asked the burning
question. ‘Did he do it?’ The glass
moved to ‘yes.’
We
were all cold by this time and broke the circle.
We accused each other of moving the glass,
all vehemently denying doing any such thing.
I know I didn't sleep very well that night and we never mentioned that evening to each other again.
The white house you can see
beside the church was divided in two and Mary lived on the side by the church,
you entered through the lynch gate up the path and then turned in to her front
door.
Photo credit: sallys-scribbles.blogspot.co.uk
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Sean looked
in amazement at his Nan; she was being really weird now. She went on to explain.
‘You can get
a ‘feel’ for spirit, some people have seen images, shadows, wisps of something,
sometimes people can hear a voice in their head and sometimes they just get a
picture of something in their mind.’
Sean said,
‘I don't understand what you are saying, Nan.’
Nan carried on. ‘OK let me think how to say it. This cottage was attached to the grounds of a
big manor house which the estate let it out to holiday makers and tourists. As soon as I walked in the door I felt the
air change. I was breathing cold air,
very cold air as if you’d just turned on the air conditioning in the car, that
sort of coldness. It was a late summer’s
day; I just thought it was cooler inside because of the thicker brick
walls. It was only in one place in the
living room if I moved elsewhere the air seemed normal.
Then as I
looked out of the window I caught a glimpse of something across the field, a
shadowy figure flitting across the stubble.
Now this was in the daytime so it was quite unusual.’
‘Did you see
a ghost then? I thought they only came
out at night.’ Sean was quite astounded
at what his grandmother was saying.
‘Ah now that
is the myth surrounding the other world.’ Nan sat and thought for a bit and
then looked at Sean. ‘Would you like a
piece of cake?’
A slice of
Victoria sponge each, in between mouthfuls Sean asked about the ruined church.
‘Oh yes, the
ruined church,’ Nan swallowed her last mouthful of cake and finished her cup of
tea.
http://sallys-scribbles.blogspot.co.uk
‘If you go
there in the day time you can have a look around, careful not to step on the
tombstones. If you go there during at night, especially if the moon shines down
through the clouds as they flit across pushed by a gentle breeze, if you stand
still and listen you can hear an owl hooting, a fox baying and a whisper among
the trees that ripples along the lake beside the grounds of the church.’
Sean’s eyes became
rounder; he sat forward in the chair hanging on his grandmother’s every word.
‘Not much
remains of the church but the rumour is that Richard Plantagenet
was the illegitimate son
of Richard III, he lived at Eastwell Manor and a memorial or tombstone is
possibly in the grounds of the church. Perhaps
that is who I saw that day.’
‘Did you
really, Nan?’ Sean isn't quite sure whether to believe his grandmother or
not. ‘So are there zombies then? If there are ghosts there must be zombies.’
His Nan
laughs. ‘I don’t think so. They are just
stories and horror films.’
‘But what if
they were real and came out on Halloween, what would we do then?’
‘Lock your
doors and don’t go out at night.’ His Nan winked at him. Sean really didn't know what to believe.
‘How do you
know if you've seen a ghost? Do witches
exist?’
So many
questions unanswered.
‘People used
to think that witches were evil crones, casting spells on people they didn't like,
turning people in to frogs and toads and mice and rats.’
‘Nan!’
‘In the
olden days that is what people believed whereas maybe they were just people who
knew the old folklore and what to pick in the woods to make medicines. Don’t forget, Sean, they didn’t have Google
back in those days to find out things.’
‘Nan, you
are so silly sometimes.’
Sean jumped
across to the sofa and gave his grandmother a great big squeeze.
Now it was
time for him to get ready to go home.
If you want to know more here are two links:
http://news.bbc.co.uk/local/kent/hi/people_and_places/religion_and_ethics/newsid_8949000/8949935.stm
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I liked the recount of your teenage years and the Ouija board experience Sally. Used to hear lots of stories like that, but not so much these days. I can just imagine your terror at the time and as you thought about it later. Obviously you haven't forgotten it.
ReplyDeleteAnd I loved your story of Sean and his grandmother and the way you interspersed it with local colour...and images. It was heartwarming. I love hearing stories of the Nan's of the world imparting knowledge to their grand kids. And the differing takes on the supernatural from Sean and his grandmother was a lovely way to show the generation 'gap'. She gave Sean something to think about. (Lovely the way he calls in on his Nan on his way home from school.)
As always Sally, thanks so much for participating in the WEP challenge. Love your support.
Denise :-)
Hi, Sally:
ReplyDeleteYou were braver than I was. We actually got an Ouija board for Christmas one year and my brothers and sisters took it out of the box once. I didn't touch it. I have this inbuilt fear of the supernatural, have for as long as I can remember, I don't go near such things – don't tempt the unknown!
Your story of Sean and Nan was heartwarming and reminded me of some of the discussions I used to have with my own grandmother. I loved hearing about her life before cars were typical forms of transportation. Especially stories of her life on the farm that'd been in the family for generations, and yes her house that was haunted.
I love the exchange about ghosts, as I believe family members who've passed on, never in a haunting way, but just as a reminder, a gentle hello, have visited me a few times. "You can get a ‘feel’ for spirit, some people have seen images, shadows, wisps of something, sometimes people can hear a voice in their head and sometimes they just get a picture of something in their mind." I do believe this and yet I find it more difficult to believe in the more malevolent form of ghosts, or I simply don't want to admit to the possibility.
Thanks for providing the links to the place and mystery of the illegitimate son of Richard III, and great combination of background, lore, and family!
This is a wonderful addition to the WEP Halloween Challenge, thank you for participating. I think you'll find the December Challenge, Holiday Celebrations that are out of the world a delightful challenge!
Happy Halloween!
three Ghosts I've seen
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I was given a message
then told to go
the message I passed on
the person showed woe
I said no more messages I'll give
no more ghosts did show
Funnily enough, I was sitting here talking to my 17 year old son as I clicked on this Sally. We were talking about the differences between my generation (I'm 53) and his, and expectations of the future, and belief systems. Providence? That we were two separate generations talking about life?
ReplyDeleteYoung kids do not understand us - my 17 year old is like having a grandkid that lives with me - and I know we don't always understand them. Such different worlds, and experiences. Hard to believe, but I guess WE were as skeptical of myths and the supernatural as today's kids are.
This was an interesting generational exploration. I liked the story. Your Ouija experience was interesting. Who knows who influenced the answers; everyone always thinks they did not.
I adore those old stories about churchyard ghosts and spirits on the move :)
ReplyDeleteIntriguing experience with the Ouija board, reminded me of an Agatha Christie mystery where it is used to prop up an alibi...Enjoyed your flash - great insight into the differences in perception between current and previous generations.
".. maybe they were just people who knew the old folklore and what to pick in the woods to make medicines." Liked that interpretation much. No witches, just healers and loners and people seeing things differently from the rest.
We have an Ouija board we bought at an estate sale. Haven't messed around with it yet, but I don't believe in that sorta thing anyway.
ReplyDeleteNice generation differences flash!
The Ouija board story? Yes, I had the exact same experience. I still suspect my friend moved the piece of wood. Maybe. Never touched it after that. Your story of the Nan's tale is so sweet. I could clearly picture the child's mind drawn into her tale. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteNice ghost story and I liked the atmosphere of the cottage with the ruined church nearby. It is similar to a setting from a film I really liked called Watcher in the Woods. The watcher turns out to be aliens.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting perspective from Sean's grandmother concerning the fact that ghosts are not always seen, but sometimes just felt or maybe heard. If a person had to choose just one sense, I wonder which one would be the creepiest experience?
ReplyDeleteImagine a multi-sensory ghostly encounter... to see, hear and feel it *uncontrollable shudder*
I think I'd die from shock!
I loved this. I am Nanless (if that is a word) and have always yearned to have one just like Sean's.
ReplyDeleteI do believe that we can feel things/hear things/ and sometimes see things for which we have (at present) no explanation. And I am certain that some spots retain an energy (good or evil) from things which have happened there.
Your ouija story was very familiar too. Thank you.
I've used a Ouija board too, long ago. I didn't like using it on a regular basis. My mom would have nothing to do with it. I like your story and hearing the tales about ghosts and how we perceive them. Well done! Sounds like an interesting grandmother.
ReplyDeleteI don't think I'd ever dare use a Ouija board after all the stories I've heard about them. Too scary! Thanks for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteOuija boards seem to have gone out of favor. We used to have great times with them. I still get the shivers thinking about those candlelit evenings, evoking the spirits. I liked your piece and enjoyed reading it. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteI remember my older brother talking about using an Ouija board when he was a teenager...I never wanted anything to do with the stuff! Of course, they're not quite as mystical as they were once considered to be, but they do make for some great spine-chilling tales!
ReplyDeleteLoved your fiction piece as well. Nan certainly built up a nicely spooky atmosphere, interspersed with local history and legends.
Ooo, I loved your story and your remembrance from your teen years. I had friends who used Ouija boards, but I never wanted to mess with them. They would recount stuff that happened and it frightened me so much.
ReplyDeleteYour story is wonderful. You have Sean's character down and the grandmother too. I am super jealous. Great job. Love the local past history you chose to bring in to the story. Fabulous job!
I never thought Ouija boards anything but dangerous in that it was knocking on a door to something you didn't know on the Other Side. Knock on a strange door, and it might open!
ReplyDeleteLove your memories of your teen friends. You painted a story with rich culture and living characters. Bravo.
Beautiful story, very warmhearted.
ReplyDeleteOh, that's a creepy Ouija story! "Sometimes you just feel them" - I love that line! Great pictures with this.
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