This bi-monthly writing challenge
has a slightly different look and feel to it due to the Covid situation.
Our wonderful team are able to
keep the challenge going by going WEP-Lite for
this month and maybe in August 2020 as well – we all have to be aware of the
situation as it changes for everyone.
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hard behind the scenes to make this a successful writing challenge and wish
everybody, the team, the participants, readers and their support networks my
very best wishes in the coming weeks and months.
Here is my take on the prompt on URBAN NIGHTMARE.
BLAME
Bibi
had exhausted his usual haunts, there was no food to be had anywhere, the tasty
chicken skins were just a vague memory now.
It was time to venture into the metropolis. His nose and whiskers vibrated as he scuttled
backwards away from the strange noises. Crashing in to the wheels of a large
skip he received a sharp nip on his rear end. His body revolved quickly only to
face growling and snarling teeth, he gasped as sharp fetid breath took his own
breath away.
‘Get
off my property.’
Beady
black eyes, full of hatred and violence glared at Bibi. Barda was the biggest and scariest rat he
knew. Bibi dashed across the asphalt,
dodging loud, cacophonous machines, he flattened himself against the edge of a
glass door, Bibi’s claws scrabbled for purchase on the cold concrete as the
door opened, hauling himself up several large risers, with a final huge effort
and a leap of gigantic proportions, gave himself a brief respite on a flat
space. Thundering footsteps and that
particular smell of human kind engulfed his senses as he backed into a darkened
recess.
Marka
nudged him from the edges of her web before he could break any more of her
carefully constructed strands. Heaving
to catch his breath, her clicking scolded him, berating him mercilessly. His heart rate began to slow down, as he heard
the damage he had done.
‘Flies
are so scarce, let alone trying to catch anything more substantial, to be
accosted by some young whipper-snapper who decided he would crash into my
home.’ Bibi inched his way out as Marka’s
diatribe faded away.
He
scrambled up the next flight, his claws clacking on the concrete steps until he
reached the top. Standing on his hind
legs, whiskers quivering as he surveyed his surroundings. Four blue doors all with letter boxes and
numbers. No egress from there.
He
scuttled back in to the shadows as an apparition appeared out of one of doors. An odorous smell wreathed its way along the
landing, exuding plumes of smoke that swung this way and that, noxious fumes
tickling his nostrils, sliding insidiously down his windpipe, poison emanating
from a man swinging a can emitting foul smelling vapour.
Bibi
began to feel drowsy, disorientated, he struggled to move his legs, his claws could
find no purchase on the unforgiving concrete, his body went limp as he slumped
on to his side.
‘Gotcha,
ya little varmint.’ A muffled but
exultant cry came from Ted, his protective clothing garbling his words.
‘This
‘ere is for ‘umans, not rats like you,’ he spat out, showing his nicotine
stained teeth protruding over his bottom lip through the plastic face covering,
the spittle settling on his visor. Grabbing Bibi’s tail, he rammed him in to a
hessian sack, tightly tying the opening before slinging it over his shoulder. An unconscious Bibi landed against something
soft and furry, another captured rat.
His
senses gradually began to return, Bibi opened his eyes to take in his
surroundings. Cold air penetrated
through unforgiving metal bars, blocking his view. There was just enough space to turn his body. He tried to clamber up but his feet couldn’t
find any purchase on the slippery rods. Squeaking
his alarm, he called out. An answering
call came back from the cage next door.
A mangy looking animal faced him, dull and bloodshot eyes, fur that had
fallen out in patches, pink skin shining luminously from its side as the creature
laboured to breathe.
‘How
long have you been here?’ Bibi asked,
needing to know but dreading the reply.
The
answer came in panting phrases. ‘Too
long. No escape. Injections. Experiments. Poison you.’
Gasping for breath, the answers came slowly, bit by bit, piece by piece
the story unfolded.
A
virus had spread across the world, humans blamed rodents, namely rats, black or
brown, young or old, male or female, catching them, experimenting on them
trying to find a cure, only succeeding in decimating the rat population in
their quest.
Bibi’s
heart began racing, he was trapped and powerless. Death would follow soon. He watched his neighbour breathe his last, watched
the emaciated body writhe in spasms of agony.
He didn’t want that. Gathering
his courage, he scouted his small enclosure for any possible means of
escape.
+++++++++++++++
‘Tell
me more, Granddad Ted, about when you were a young man.’
‘Oh,
aye, my son. It wasn't fun. My job title was RAT CATCHER. All
those years ago people were mighty scared of those pests. ‘Course, nowadays it’s different but back
then we didn’t know any better.
People
got sick and then sicker. All over. Nobody could go out. Food was scarce. Farms were mobbed and trashed as people tried
to find food. Soap ran out. Hygiene was supposed to save everyone but
nobody could wash.
Hospitals
closed. Doctors closed. Dentists closed. Schools closed. Shops closed. Pubs closed. Restaurants
closed. Everywhere was closed apart from food shops and online shopping.’
‘I
bet the kids loved that, Granddad Ted.’
‘Oh
aye, for a while it was fun. Then curfews began. I got the job as Rat Catcher because of my
training in pest control. Nobody made
fun of me then. I did a bloomin’ good
job as well, I can tell you.’
‘How
many rats did you catch?’
‘Well
now, my boy, too many to count. They
were wriggly things, you had to tie the sack up tight and as soon as it was
full, deposit them in the chute of the laboratory.’
‘Did
it work, Granddad Ted?’
‘Well
I got a medal for me troubles and hard work, didn’t I? You can see it up there, pride of place on me
mantelpiece. Your gran didn’t like my
job but she liked the money I saved.’
‘So
how come we are all safe now, Granddad?’
‘Well
it turns out, lad, that it wasn't them rats after all.’
‘What
was it?’
Granddad
Ted winked at his precious grandson.
‘Nobody
knows, boy, nobody knows.’
Word count: 1001
I’ll leave you with
this:
QUOTE FROM LORD
OF THE RINGS: