This
is a unique flash fiction challenge where we provide you with a new photo each
week, and the first sentence of a story. Your challenge is to finish the story using 100-150 words, not
including the sentence provided. Don’t forget to use the opening sentence… This
challenge runs from Monday to Sunday! Get creative and have fun finishing the
story!
Thanks today to J.A. over at Living
Author Society for
suggesting a topic for this week’s challenge.
https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/2015/08/10/mondays-finish-the-story-august-10th-2015/
Please include the photo with your bit of flash and a link back to
this post. Do
not forget to click on the link to find the blue frog and add your link so that
others can enjoy your story too! Now let’s have some fun!
Finish the story begins with: “Where did they go?”
THE OUTING
‘Where did they go?’
Darcy didn’t have the answer to that question.
She could make up a story to tell her children as they
trudged along the single track path to the ruins in the distance. The red dusty brickwork lent itself to
visions of cowboy westerns, rifles at the ready, men defending their stance behind
walls that crumbled under a bombardment from the enemy.
She could tell Brian and James about the War that had been
fought here; a hard, bitter battle that ended with many, many casualties. Women and men fought side by side, to retain
their freedom, to be allowed to live their frugal lives scratching a living
from earth that was reluctant to nurture the seedlings they had sown in the
spring.
‘Mum, mum,’ Brian tugged on her sleeve. ‘Can we eat our sandwiches when we get
there?’
Seven year old twins thought more of their stomachs rather
than history.
Word count: 150
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Of course they did. Great story.
ReplyDeleteDitto on tnkerr's note. So true, but while eating they may want to listen to history. Lovely flash!
ReplyDeleteExcellent story!
ReplyDeleteI love this story. A good read!
ReplyDeleteYep, that sounds about right!
ReplyDeleteThey certainly do! Nicely done Sally! Thanks for writing again for the MFtS challenge and be well... ^..^
ReplyDeleteHow true to real life with so few words. Well done!
ReplyDeleteChildren will always think of food and drink when we take them outside the house. Good one.
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