This is a unique flash fiction
challenge where we provide you with a new photo each week, and the first
sentence of a story. Your challenge is to finish the story using
100-150 words, not including the sentence provided. Don’t
forget to use the opening sentence… This challenge runs from Monday to
Sunday! Get creative and have fun finishing the story!
Please include the photo with
your bit of flash and a link back to this post. Do not forget to click
on the blue guy and add your link so that others can enjoy your story
too! Now let’s have some fun!
Finish the story begins with:
“After losing her head, she realized that the rest of her body was falling apart!”
“After losing her head, she realized that the rest of her body was falling apart!”
“After losing her head, she realized that the rest of her body was
falling apart!”
‘Nanny, please don't make me cry,’
Elsie cried.
Wrapping her arms around her
young granddaughter tightly, Ellen let the book fall to the ground.
‘Hush now, sweetie, everything
will be alright.’
‘But the doll hasn’t got her head
and her arms are broken,’ came a despairing wail.
The sound of sirens could be
heard coming up the road, Ellen and Elsie rushed to the window to see out. The ambulance stopped right outside their
house. Elsie looked at her
grandmother.
‘Princess Charlotte of Cambridge will be well looked after at
the Doll’s Hospital. The Doll doctor will make her well again. She’ll come home brand new, with a very
pretty head and lovely brown hair all tied up with blue silk ribbons. Her arms will work properly and she’ll be
able to move her legs again.’
Ellen’s voice was reassuringly
calm as she brushed her lips against Elsie’s curly ringlets.
Word count: 150
Another terrific story Sally! :) I like the doll hospital and the ambulance coming for the doll! Thanks again for writing for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge! Be well... ^..^
ReplyDeleteI loved this story! Excellent writing! When I was a little bitty girl I had a doll that I just loved and it was in desperate need of repair. My grandmother talked to me for a long time to get me to give up my doll so she could send it to the doll hospital. I really didn't want to let her have it but I finally did. I honestly don't remember if I ever got it back.
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I hope the doll comes back in one piece, though she seems to be in a pretty bad way.
ReplyDeleteI have had a couple dolls repaired. I fear it's a dying art where I live. Your story is sweet, but now I'm frightened for the future of all well-loved dolls.
ReplyDeleteWhat a precious story that warms any heart...especially Nanny's and Nana's, Cheryl-Lynn aka Oliana
ReplyDeleteNice work Sally ~ I love the emotional side to this and of course the up to date name-dropping ~ :)
ReplyDeleteGreat story!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the link to the recent Royal arrival, nicely done.
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