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The next photo is the PHOTO PROMPT. Study it. What
does it say to you? Remember, it’s about what you see, not what you’re looking
at. ;)
PHOTO PROMPT –
© Santoshwriter
CONSEQUENCES
She saw the dewdrops
sparkling like diamonds, glinting with forgotten memories, brilliant with hope,
the love she felt for her family was the only thing that kept her going in
these dark, dismal days. The work was hard,
conditions were harsh but she accepted her punishment as her due.
The next few years
would prove to her and her loved ones that she accepted the consequences of her
actions. In time maybe they would
understand what had driven her to such desperate measures, such loneliness that
she now endured.
Would they still be
waiting for her when she returned?
Word count: 100
Dear Sally,
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like she has a rough road ahead.
shalom,
Rochelle
This piece fills me with questions, and isn't that the mark of excellent writing? I want to read MORE!
ReplyDeleteThis makes me want to know more - what has she done and what is it that is causing her suffering? Is she punishing herself with her guilt?
ReplyDeleteOh, linking the sparkling dewdrops to hope and love is a brilliant idea. Great writing, I love it.
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