7 October 2014
THE RULES:
1) Use the photo(s) and prompt to write a
500-word story; all elements of the prompt must be a feature in the brief story
you create.
2) When 1 photo/5 words is the theme, the 5 words MUST be
clearly referenced in your story. Variations on a word are allowed within
reason (for example: adding ‘s,’ ‘ed,’ ‘ing’
to the word to be grammatically correct); but creating a new, unrelated,
word is not.
3) We ask that you keep your story to approximately 500 words
(give or take). We aren’t counting but, please, no 1000-word entries.
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sleep/run in fear over the blog hop; instead let this be an exercise in letting
the imagination run wild while staying within the discipline of
flash-fiction—short and compelling!
THE PHOTO:
Mandatory words:
blister
grease
frock
pirate
bishop
HERE IS MY SHORT STORY:
ENSEMBLE
Lucy could feel the blister forming on the sole of her
foot. Looking in the medicine cabinet
she found some ointment and applied the soothing grease to the affected part. She remembered the funfair setting up
when she had been jogging around the park and thought she would take the kids
to it at the weekend. Her little boy
would love the pirate show they were
advertising.
On the living room mantelpiece
stood an invitation. It had arrived in the post
encased in an ivory coloured envelope, thick paper, embossed with monogrammed
initials on the front and back flap. She had opened the tissue lined envelope
and withdrawn a delicately perfumed, gilt edge card with beautiful calligraphy
printed on the inside.
‘Mr. and Mrs. Bishop requested the pleasure, blah,
blah, blah.’ It was to be the social
event of the year according to her mother, her cousin and her uncle and aunt’s
only daughter was getting married next month to a lovely chap. She had certainly done well for herself.
Lucy thought
back to her own wedding day. She had
waited for Dan to notice her in school but it wasn’t until after they had left
school and were both working before he became aware of her. She smiled to herself; he was certainly worth
waiting for. Now her cousin, Amy, was marrying Bill and they seemed to be the
perfect match.
She down at
her looked at her legs. There it was
that bothersome ‘training tan’ - white ankles and feet where she wore her
trainers and socks was going to a bit of a bother when she wore that frock to the wedding. Spray tan to even up the tan from her legs so
that she could wear her strappy sandals.
The only thing
left to get was her hat. Dan didn't know
why she needed a hat but she had explained to him that it would finish off her
whole ensemble. A hat, matching shoes
and clutch in the palest apricot colour to go with her chiffon dress that would
just float above her knees and swirl in such a lady-like fashion that she,
herself, would feel like the belle of the ball.
Dan was quite
happy to wear his best office suit to the wedding and nothing she could say
would persuade him to fork out any more money than necessary. He was quite happy, once she’d explained
about the effect her whole outfit would make, to spend whatever it took to make
it come together. Lucy would not take
advantage of his generosity knowing that they had to keep an eye on their
finances but she would scour the shops in the High Street all day to find
exactly what she wanted.
Spray tan had
been applied, her legs looked lovely and her frock, hat, shoes, clutch and just
a few pieces of subtle jewellery set off the ensemble. Dan looked at Lucy with
love in his eyes as they made their way to the church.
Word count: 502
"Blister" was much too obvious for the photo. I did worry about "bishop" but you found a loophole with that one! Clever girl.
ReplyDeleteClever use of the word/photo, Sally. I enjoyed your story!
ReplyDeleteSally, thanks for such a delightful story. I am very fond of colours after cancer, and the mention of ivory and peach (also my favorites) was very nice. Plus, I like stories about love and romance and weddings... :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a very sweet story! I like the "training tan" part too. That Dan does seem like a keeper.
ReplyDeleteKathy M.
A good take on the photo prompt, Sally. I enjoyed this :)
ReplyDeleteI love a sweet story like this... a loving couple going to a wedding. Again you packed a wallop of a story into a few hundred words.
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