30 September 2013
Submit a story by next Tuesday
evening, September 30th. In case you aren’t familiar with the guidelines,
they are:
1) Use the two photos or one photo and five
mandatory words, whatever is given, in your story.
2) Keep your word count 500 or less.
3) You have until next Tuesday night to link up
your story.
4) Have fun, don’t stress, and let those creative
juices flow!
5) Check back next Wednesday to read the new
stories — if they touch you in any way, please feel free to reblog them.
The prompt this week is a two-photo prompt idea…
HERE IS MY SHORT STORY:
PREPARATIONS
Rusty, Dusty, Buster, Lily, Poppy
and Fleur watched her through the glass door, beseeching eyes pleading with her
to let them through. She felt guilty
shutting them in one room but she didn’t have time for any distractions today,
there was so much to get through.
Her visitors would arrive early
tomorrow morning and she had to get the bedrooms looking spic and span, dusting
to do, carpets to vacuum and then there was the guest bathroom to shine and sparkle.
Helen took a deep breath, paused
and looked out of the living room window to her garden that was another job she
was going to tackle this afternoon, the dogs had made rather a mess of the lawn.
She’d have to go out there with the pooper-scooper and then hose down the patio
area in case they had strayed there as well to do their business.
She loved her dogs to bits but
they were hard work sometimes and Jerry, her husband, didn't make life any easier
for her by inviting his parents down at short notice and of course they jumped
at the chance to come and make sure she was being the ‘proper’ wife he
deserved.
He was such a different man when
he was with his parents and reverted back to a more traditional, or as Helen
thought of it, a chauvinist way of treating her, the little woman at home,
barefoot and pregnant in the kitchen, greeting him at the door with his pipe
and slippers. He knew darn well that wasn’t her role in life.
Coming back to the present Helen
realised that the time was getting on, one more apologetic look at the dogs she
rushed upstairs and completed the chores in record time.
The barking and tail wagging that
greeted her as she returned downstairs was enough to melt her heart but she
stayed firm because now the garden was to be tackled next. She couldn’t do it in her slippers so she
would find those ‘welly clogs’ she bought at the Garden Centre a few weeks ago.
They had really taken her eye,
purple sparkly bits and really comfortable to wear. They would keep her feet dry and she would
change back to her slippers as she entered the back door instead of traipsing
in muddy splatters from outside.
Hang on, there was only the right
boot, where on earth was the other one?
Helen looked at her adorable dogs, suspicion began to dawn as they
stared back at her, not pleading or beseeching eyes now but rather a shuffling,
shameful look that came over them all.
Helen glared back at them; you
are little tinkers you know, wagging her finger at them and trying to
frown. She had never really got that
reprimand tone in her voice even though she had taken them all to obedience
class.
Perhaps it will rain tomorrow and
her in-laws wouldn’t be able to go out in the garden - she could only hope.
Word count: 500
Oh I know that shuffling, shamefaced look only too well. It usually happens when Miss Cally has dragged something out of the kitchen bin and into her basket. Let's hope the in-laws are more open and honest than her husband. The dogs may be little tinkers, but he's a great big stinker.
ReplyDeleteOh, I like Helen! What a sweet character, doing her best to please the hubby and the in-laws with just enough sass that we know she doesn't it too seriously. And those little tinker pups--they are just as mischievous as the pups in the other story submissions. I love it!
ReplyDeleteGood work, Sally. I always enjoy your stories.
Oh that's cute. It's hard to have a stern tone with those puppy dog eyes looking at you!
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