28 October 2014
Here are the rules:
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Use the photo(s) and
prompt provided to write a
500-word story; all elements of the prompt must be a feature in the
brief story you create. We aren’t counting, but for the fairness of the
readers please, no 1000+ word entries.
500-word story; all elements of the prompt must be a feature in the
brief story you create. We aren’t counting, but for the fairness of the
readers please, no 1000+ word entries.
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The two photos must be
visible in your unless the blog hostess has determined that it will be a
1 photo/5 words theme. If this is the case, the photo and 5 words MUST be
clearly referenced in your story. Variations on a word are allowed
within reason (for example: adding s, ed, ing to the word to be
grammatically correct); but creating a new, unrelated, word is not. (To see an example of a “1 photo/5 word” story see Faith, Hope, Love, and Pink by one of our hostesses, Debb Stanton.)
1 photo/5 words theme. If this is the case, the photo and 5 words MUST be
clearly referenced in your story. Variations on a word are allowed
within reason (for example: adding s, ed, ing to the word to be
grammatically correct); but creating a new, unrelated, word is not. (To see an example of a “1 photo/5 word” story see Faith, Hope, Love, and Pink by one of our hostesses, Debb Stanton.)
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Photos are the
property of the hostess for the week, unless otherwise mentioned. Please Do Not
share photos and/or prompt words as your own.
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In order to honour the
community-purpose of the blog hop, we ask that you please reference the blog hop (not one of the
hostesses) in your post so your blog audience and the blog hop community
may all be connected.
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If you have any questions or need
any help don’t hesitate to contact one of the hop hosts: Leanne,
Debb,
Tena
or Heather you can direct link your story with one of the hosts.
The prompts this week are chosen by Debb:
Two photographs to craft a 500-ish word story
THE DREAM
She dreamt last night.
Her dream followed her into the bathroom; it followed her in to her
kitchen. It sat at the edge of her brain
as she ate her bowl of muesli. It edged
and pricked at her subconscious thoughts while she brushed her teeth and put
her clothes on.
She brushed her hair and applied her make-up. The mirror reflected a thoughtful face, a
slight frown creasing her forehead as she tried to recall the details of her
dream. It must be of importance to have
left such a feeling of foreboding in her mind.
She picked up her keys from the corner table in the hallway,
shutting the front door firmly behind her she unlocked her car and reversed out
of the driveway. The commute to work was
dreary, mind boringly numbing as she sat in the traffic jam waiting for the
lights to turn green.
She wouldn’t make it through in the next change; there were
too many cars in front of her and that large articulated refrigerated lorry with
the name of a famous supermarket splashed across its white sides, took up the
room of three or four cars. If it wasn't
for him she would be past these crossroads and entering the bypass to the
town.
Her mind wandered, she recalled a smell from her night’s
vision, chocolate dough with Smarties that was an aroma she hadn’t thought of
it for quite a while. Her grandmother
always made this concoction when she used to visit as a child. She would reward her with a slice for sitting
nice and quietly, being polite, saying please and thank you and not fidgeting
on her grandma’s nice sofa.
It was a long journey to her grandparents’ house. They passed many road signs, she remembers
counting them all down until they reached the magic number 79. Her parents
would instruct her to close her eyes as they indicated to take the turning.
Safely off the motorway they asked her to spell the words on
the signpost. It wasn't until she was a
teenager and they made the last trip out there that she actually realised what
the words meant. The truth of the matter
would have dire consequences her mother would always say.
An angry hoot from the car behind made her realise she should
move forward as the lights were now green. An apologetic hand wave to the sour
looking man in the driver’s seat of the car behind got a wry smile from him.
Her green eyes held his in the rear view mirror, she could
see truth in those eyes, perhaps she wouldn't mind some consequences to come
later, maybe she would stop suddenly and he would nudge her bumper, they would
get out and have a conversation, holding up the traffic even longer.
She must ask her mum for her grandmother’s old recipe book, a
few years down the line, she could see herself making that famous concoction
for their own grandchildren.
Word count: 500
Sally! This is a "yummy" story, pun intended! :) I have a lot of dreams at night, so this piece stirred up my curiosity. How nice that the lady in the story could go back to such wonderful memories. Your story is awesome!
ReplyDeleteCool. Makes me hungry. I love the twists and turns down memory lane it took. Well integrated concepts.
ReplyDeleteWhen I looked at the pictures, I could think of only a cliche plot. This is why YOU'RE the writer and I'm not. The nagging memories of a dream spawns a daydream -- clever.
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