The Rules:
1) Compose
a story using the photo and five mandatory words
2) Keep your word count 500 words or less.
3) You have until next Tuesday to link up your post.
4) Add your story (Blue Link) at Leanne's site: HERE.
2) Keep your word count 500 words or less.
3) You have until next Tuesday to link up your post.
4) Add your story (Blue Link) at Leanne's site: HERE.
5) Have
fun, don’t stress, let those creative juices flow.
6) Invite a friend. This is about community, so feel free to invite,
greet, and encourage new writers!
Next Wednesday we will post all your stories in the Writer Wednesday reveal
so the community can hop around and visit each of you!
Your five
(randomly generated) words:
Screwdriver
Saucepan
Barrel
Spine
Comb
Here is the photo:Here is my story:
WINE
AND CHEESE
The
nerves were constantly fluttering in her stomach. She’d had a week to prepare, everything on her
list was ticked off and nothing had been forgotten. She’d fixed the wonky handle on the saucepan with a Philips screwdriver she found in the kitchen
drawer. Luckily it was a cross thread
one and now she didn't have to worry spilling the hot mulled wine.
She
opened the barrel of cheese and
recoiled from the smell. Stinky cheese
was not her favourite but there needed to be a selection, tasty titbits on the
tray along with a few pitted olives, black and green and smothered in oil was
another taste she didn't enjoy.
She
moved to her bedroom, quickly passing a comb
through her long tresses, twisting it into an elegant chignon clipping it
securely into place, a dash of mascara across her long lashes, a brush of rouge
to complement her colouring, a lick of lustrous lipstick, a quick pout in the
mirror, diamond stud earrings, matching necklace, she smoothed her hands down
over the black evening dress fitting her tightly and curving in the right
places, slipping on elegant court shoes, she took a deep breath and ready
herself for the affray.
The
doorbell rang and she greeted her husband’s colleagues. Air kisses from the two women exchanged, a
slightly embarrassed husband lingered behind not knowing whether to kiss her or
shake her hand, amidst the fumble of confusion as she took their coats and hung
them on the coat rack.
She
poured red wine and white wine, sipped her glass surreptitiously noting the
time on the kitchen clock. He was late,
again, leaving her to carry the can as she maintained mundane
conversations.
Realising
she had knocked back the majority of her glass of wine she remonstrated
inwardly with herself and promised she would slow down until Rick got
here. There was no excuse. He was the one who insisted they paraded
themselves in this manner and met his colleagues socially. The least he could do was to be here on time.
Naomi’s
face started to ache with the false smiles and chit-chat and then she heard
Rick’s car in the drive. He came
bounding in, grinning apologetically as he dashed upstairs to freshen up.
Naomi
let go of the deep resentment she was harbouring against Rick, now was not the
time. She would play the dutiful hostess;
act as though nothing was wrong, she’d seen her mother do it enough times, so
all she had to do was behave as though nothing was wrong. The tears were pushed behind her clear grey
eyes as she smiled at their guests and offered more drinks.
Rick
came, stood beside her, his arm enveloped her waist, he brushed his lips
against her ear, ‘sorry,’ came his husky whisper as he slid his thumb up and
down her spine. She melted against him, as he knew she
would, he popped an olive in his mouth and winked just for her.
Word count: 498
When I read over the list of words, I thought "IMPOSSIBLE." I could never do what you do. I'd still be here scratching my head. Now having read your story, I can't imagine any other story. The words and photo flow naturally, not at all forced in order to meet the rules. (And I love the detail of the husband not knowing whether to kiss or shake hands -- that is sooooo real in my experience with social occasions that arise from my husband's work.)
ReplyDeleteHi Sally. I love romantic stories, so your story, for me, was beautiful and wonderful. Thanks for reading my story today. With writers like you, I know I will enjoy being part of WWBH!
ReplyDeleteGreat set up here Sally. I can't make my mind up if he's genuinely late and appreciative or if he's just worming his way in to her good books.
ReplyDeleteNice job, Sally! These weren't the easiest terms, but you fit them in seamlessly! I can feel Naomi's frustration and hurt-- I like the detail of her mother having to do the same thing. unfortunately, I wondered if Rick was being unfaithful or if it really was work keeping him from being home.
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