Thursday 4 June 2015

FOLLOW ME - FRIDAY FICTIONEERS










The following photo is the prompt. 

Does it tell you a story? 

Tell a story in a hundred words or less.




Photo credit: C. Hase




FOLLOW ME

He said: will you follow me to the ends of the earth?

She said: to the sun and moon and back until rebirth

He said:  hold my hand and we will travel together

She said: don’t let me go, stay with me forever and ever

He said:  put your faith and trust only in me

Look out on the wonders of this world, at all its beauty

Behold the glory of nature, the miracle that is human

She said: I see and believe in you, that is for certain

He said: I will love you always; 

For all my days.
Word count: 100
 



4 comments:

  1. How very romantic, and yet I believe their days ended, so it's sad, too.

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  2. Dear Sally,

    This could be taken as spiritual or romantic. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. They could almost be gods, so intense and absolute are their declarations. It's beautiful.

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  4. Beautifully written, and I agree with Ga H. Rereading it I get the feeling that there's something more to either them or the connection between them.

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