1) Write a story using both photos.
2) Keep your word count to 500 words or less.
3) Submit your completed story to your blog hostess (Nicole, Carrie, Tena orLeanne)
4) You have the next week to post.
5) Have fun, don’t stress, let those creative juices flow!
THE END OF THE DAY
Mary
heaved a large sigh of relief as she said goodnight to her co-workers and
headed home in her car. She parked her
little car in the garage, got out wearily, opening the door to the utility
room. As she took off her coat, hat and gloves
she noticed a huge pile of washing on the floor by the washing machine.
A
tinge of a smile curved her lips upwards.
I know what this means, she thought.
Her big baby was home from University bringing his laundry back with
him. She was sure he had said he
wouldn’t be home until the end of term, a few more weeks away.
Dirty
washing wouldn’t usually lift a person’s spirits but she really had missed her
eldest son, more than she would admit to his face. His studies were going well as far as the
weekly telephone call was concerned so doubt and worry started to fill her mind
that all wasn’t right with his course.
She
opened the door to the main house stepping through into her kitchen; the smell
of freshly ground coffee assailed her nostrils.
She hadn’t bought any fresh coffee for quite a while; it was a luxury
she couldn’t afford on her limited budget.
Martin
turned and smiled at his mum, stepped forward and gave her the biggest bear
hug. Oh she had really missed her great
big six footer of a son. Her heart
swelled with pride at how much he looked like his father.
Martin
ushered his mother to a seat at the kitchen table while he fiddled some more
with the coffee grinder and swept up the spilt beans from the canister that had
toppled on to the kitchen counter.
He
cleared his throat and explained that the coffee would take a few more
minutes. Mary looked at him waiting
patiently for his explanation of his homecoming. He was a big tease as Mary knew, again just
like his dad and would keep her waiting, teasing dodging any questions quite
deftly until he was ready to talk.
The
coffee was poured. Mary sipped the
liquid from her mug, cradling the cup in both hands, caressing the contours of
the pottery, feeling the indentations of the grooves. It was a tactile moment and helped to calm
her nerves as she guessed Martin was going to tell her something very important.
The
doorbell rang and Martin rushed to answer it.
He came back in with a young woman in tow, holding her hand
tightly.
‘Mum,
I’d like you to meet Naomi. We’ve come
home to tell you that we want to get married in a couple of weeks’ time.’ Martin paused, pulled Naomi closer to his
mother. Mary stood up and opened her
arms. As Naomi fell in to her embrace
Mary could feel a slight bump in her stomach.
Her
hands flew to her lips. ‘Oh.’
Smiling
at them both she nodded her acceptance of becoming a grandmother.
Word Count: 498
Quite a few surprises for Mary! I enjoyed this, Sally. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteAwwww, what a lovely story! ~sigh~ I understand Mary's joy. I'm going to become a grandmother for the 9th time in May :-)
ReplyDeleteI bet NO ONE ELSE wrote a story in which doing laundry was a happy thing. You never fall for the cliche.
ReplyDeleteGreat story Sally, so well written, I especially enjoyed the added little surprise at the end. Makes me want to know what happens next!
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