This year's theme for Write Edit Publish is the Year of Music. To start us off in February - All You Need is Love
Here is my contribution with apologies for being over the word count.
ALL YOU NEED
IS LOVE – WALTER AND SARAH
My darling Walter,
I
dreamt of you last night. Your arms were
wrapped around me as we snuggled up in bed, I felt your whiskers gently scrap
against my cheek. I heard your snores as
you slept peacefully. My tears dried on my face as I fell asleep.
I
reached out for you - but I was alone.
I
reached out in my mind.
I
reached out my love.
I
felt my fingertips tingle.
I
felt a whisper of breath
It
was the lightest of touches, a feather brushing against my lips
I
know you felt me.
I
count the days until you are home, crossing off the dates on the calendar.
Your
loving wife,
Sarah.
xxx
My darling Sarah,
My love, my heart.
I only have a few moments.
I wish I had longer.
I will not have you crying tears for me.
I hold you tightly in my heart every moment of the day and
night.
W.
My
dearest Walter,
Every
night I hold back my tears. Every night
I open a tiny corner of the blackout curtains peek out, one tiny corner, for
one tiny, precious moment and send my love soaring across the sky to wherever
you are. Keep safe my darling.
Your
ever-loving wife,
Sarah
xxx
My Darling Sarah,
This evening we had time for a hot cooked meal. I feel a bit
more human now. The rumour is we have tonight
to recuperate before we start marching again.
Today was a tough day.
My Lieutenant asked me to go through Charlie’s things ready for
him to send on. I steeled myself as I did
this last thing for him. We thought he
was going to make it but God obviously had other plans for this young boy. I remember he told me his dad was so proud
when he joined up but his mum was very cross.
Now she has to accept he is gone forever.
Sarah, you must move to the country. The coast is not safe anymore. Stay safe so I can come home to you.
Love you forever and ever.
Walter.
Xxx
My darling
husband,
We are
to be evacuated to a farm at Wells in Somerset.
It seems even further away from you, although I know you are thousands
of miles away but if I think it is only a piece of sea separating us then I can
cope a bit more.
We
are only allowed one suitcase. We don't know how long we will be gone for I
will work on the farm, probably in the fields.
I am not afraid of hard work. I
am only afraid of the evil in the world.
I am
so proud of you my darling husband and all the men who risk their lives so that
we can live freely but sometimes I do wonder if the price is too high.
Do
you think I could write to Charlie’s mum?
Are you allowed to give me her address?
Waiting
forever for you to return.
Love
you more and more each day.
Sarah
xxx
Dear Mrs. Jones,
My deepest sympathies go out to you and
your husband at this time. My husband,
Walter, served with your Charlie. I do
hope you don’t mind me writing to you. I
met your lovely lad last summer. He didn’t have enough time to get to Wales to
see you and his dad so he came home with Walter on a 24-hour leave.
We chatted and drank some tea. He talked about you, he showed me a
photograph of you, his dad and his two little brothers. He kept the picture in a pocket next to his
heart. He gave me a lovely cuddle as he
left, in his farewell embrace I felt all the love he had for his family which I
now pass on to you.
I am working on a farm in Somerset so I
think of you working on your farm, doing the same chores as I am, waking up
early and retiring early, physically worn out.
Let’s hope this horrible war is over
soon, they say it will be over by Christmas.
My best wishes to you and your family.
Mrs. Sarah Kelly.
Dear Sarah,
Thank you for your kind words.
I cry every night for my boy.
Best wishes
Mrs. Nora Jones.
We regret to inform you
Sergeant Walter Kelly severely wounded.
Receiving treatment at the
Royal Free Hospital.
Dear
Walter,
I
will catch the train tomorrow.
I
will be at the hospital Wednesday.
I
will look after you always.
Love
Sarah.
Dear Sarah,
Do not come.
W.
Dear
Walter,
I
came all this way to see you. Why won't
you see me?
I
love you with all my heart.
I
have found some lodgings two streets away.
I
will come to the hospital every day until you see me.
Always
yours,
Sarah.
Oh, my darling Sarah,
I am not the man I was when you saw me last.
I can't be the man you married.
I won't make you look after an invalid for the rest of our life.
I do love you.
With all my heart.
Walter.
Darling,
darling Walter,
I
leave this letter by your bedside.
I
know you can't see it.
I
know you can’t pick it up.
I
leave it with all my love.
I
leave it with you for all eternity.
As a
soldier you did your duty.
As a
man you honoured your country
As
my husband you had to go.
As
your wife I understand.
As
your wife I wanted you to stay.
My
husband
My
lover
My
friend
My
heart breaks
My
soul weeps
My
mind shrieks
I scream
in the night
I
scream in the daylight
Why
do humans fight?
Who
was right?
Yours
for always and forever.
A month later
Sara sat at the kitchen
table drinking tea, the letter box clanged as an envelope dropped on to the
doormat. Wearily she rose and picked up
the missive. She didn’t recognise the
writing, reading her name on the folded piece of paper her emotions engulfed
her.
My darling Sarah,
Nurse Jones has kindly offered to write
my words to you as the infection has taken hold of my whole body and my hands
do not obey my commands.
I have to say goodbye to you, my darling
girl, not that I want to but things have taken a turn for the worse. I am sorry for my harsh words. I still believe I was right. You are young and can continue your
life. I want you to be happy. I want you to find love again. I know you
will never forget me and I will always be there watching over you from
afar.
You are the love of my life and now you
must find a way forward, give that big heart of yours a chance to love again.
Goodbye, my love.
Walter.
P.S.
Dear Mrs. Kelly, this letter may take
some time to get to you but the last words Walter said were, ‘Tell Sarah – all
you need is love.’
Yours sincerely,
Nurse Jones
Word count: 1186
Tag line: an
abiding love in times of trouble.
Such a poignant story. So much love. Such a deep tragedy. Sadly, it mirrors too many true stories: some from the long-ago past, others from recently. I hope Sarah will find another love, even if it would only happen much later.
ReplyDeleteSoo sad 😢
ReplyDeleteOh Sally! I couldn't hold back my tears reading this. Absolutely stellar writing.
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ReplyDeleteThis made me cry. By the time I got to the end, tears were streaming mightily out of my eyes. Beautiful! just simply beautiful.
Shalom aleichem
Oh my heart! I wish Walter had seen her in the hospital & I hope Sarah does indeed find another love one day.
ReplyDeleteMy heart sank as I read this.
ReplyDeleteSuch a heart-wrenching piece and it's so fitting that the story unfolded in the form of letters.
Well done!
Hi Sally - way too true ... I can attest to this and my mother's loss of her love during the War ... desperate. Thank goodness for those kind people who write about the contacts they have, so loved ones have a degree of knowledge of the 'how'. Brought back memories for me ... with thoughts - Hilary
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful story; I feel it was written from the depths of your heart. Thank you for sharing--it touched a place deep within me. xx oo
ReplyDeleteSuch a sad and touching story - brought tears to my eyes. I hope Sarah was able to find love again.
ReplyDeleteTragic but beautiful like all abiding love is. War is so cruel and so pointless. Thank you for sharing this story.
ReplyDeleteThis is so heartbreaking. War is a terrible thing. You portrayed the human cost of war perfectly here.
ReplyDeleteSally, beautiful image of true love against the backdrop of pitiless wartime and its attendant horrors. I love the way you tell it through letters. Even though the ending was tragic, there is hope. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a moving story of love and loss. The epistolary form was very effective in showing the characters emotions. It must have been awful for those separated from their loved ones and awaiting news of their safety.
ReplyDeleteHeartbreaking. And well written.
ReplyDeleteWar... so heartbreaking. Thanks for a story that reminds us of the human loss.
ReplyDeleteEspecially heartbreaking given what's going on in the Ukraine right now. Very powerful piece.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done, and very moving. Sadly it seems we never learn and stories like this are unfolding right now, which is heartbreaking.
ReplyDeleteHi Sally. What a beautiful, poignant tale. It filled my heart with love. Such a well-deserved win. I'm sorry for visiting this late. Glad I did now, else would have missed reading your wonderful entry. So relevant at the moment.
ReplyDelete-Sonia
Hard twist on the "Dear John" letters. Very powerful.
ReplyDeleteHope you're having a great day! My latest blog post has my theme for the April #AtoZChallenge (I'm writing speculative fiction and looking for prompts).
At Operation Awesome we have the #PassOrPages query contest going on (friends or enemies to lovers Romance).
Looks like I'll be very busy the next few weeks!
March quote: "Twenty years from now, you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do." - Mark Twain
So proud to be related to this very talented, special lady. To write something with so much emotion knowing what she has been going through has made my heart ache
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful and so sad. The tears are still flowing...
ReplyDeleteI wonder when we will learn how futile war is.
As I said before, so beautifully sad, and tears, can't hold them back when reading it. More of these stories, too many more to come. Thank you for your talent! Congratulations on your win. No one deserves it more!
ReplyDeleteHi Congratulations on winning this WEP writing article - brilliantly put together ... it so resonates - brilliant ... thank you - cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteOh... such a beautiful story. You left me teary-eyed...
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