Here is the short version of our
Writer Wednesday Blog Hop rules:
1) Use the photo and words provided to write a
500-word story–please incorporate both photos and link back to the Writer
Wednesday Blog Hop.
2) Keep your word count 500 or less (or a few more
words if they’re needed).
3) You have until next Tuesday night to link up
your story.
4) Use the Blue frog below to add your story at Leanne’s , Tena’s, or Heather’s website
and follow the instructions.
5) Have fun, don’t stress, and let those creative
juices flow! Invite a friend!
The photo prompt is courtesy of Leanne
Mandatory
words:
Wine
Arm
Frown
Chapel
Bottle
Here is my story:
THE NEWS
Kate looked around the kitchen,
gave the counter top one last wipe, checked the oven with the lasagne inside
that was heating up nicely, the salad was prepared and chilling in the fridge,
the dressing ready to hand on the side, the French baguette was on the bread board
ready for slicing, the butter at room temperature, the wine bottle, bought at an extravagant cost from *The Chapel Down Winery, a local vineyard,
unusual in England and not always the best wine but part of the evening’s
entertainment.
It was a year ago that she was in
Paris with Luke, a last minute weekend trip that he whisked her away on. It was
such a romantic gesture; Luke was very good at the big gestures, larger than
life but it didn't last, not once it was back to the living day-to-day stuff.
Luke had wined and dined her and they
strolled along the streets of Paris, her arm
pulled through his, she remembered the ripple of his muscles that sent
tingles along her skin. It was so
romantic. They sauntered along the paths
and then on to a bridge with padlocks entwined through the grills. They stopped and stared reading everyone that
they could.
Everybody had taken on the
romance of the gestures, padlocks with the names of couples on them, there were
pictures of weddings, boys and girls with their arms around each other, even
older and even more mature couples had joined in the fun. What great stories were encased in those
thoughts and hopes and dreams for the future lives of those hopeless romantics,
pictures had been taken and circulated all over Facebook and social media. Kate and Luke even took a ‘selfie’ and posted
it.
Kate poured herself half a glass
of wine, just to sip while the hands on the kitchen clock slowly moved around
to the appointed hour. Luke would be
late, he always was. She’d bought him a
fantastic watch to help with his time-keeping but that hadn’t worked. He never wore it; he said he could use his
phone to see what the time was.
How he kept down such a fantastic
job in the city she didn't know but he was a rising star in his firm although
she could see the toll it was taking on him.
There were many occasions when he stayed over, she would watch him
sleeping peacefully next to her and as she studied his face she could see the frown lines on his forehead deepening
as every month passed.
This evening was going to change
their lives. It wouldn’t be a grand,
romantic gesture but it would be a loving escalation of their partnership. She couldn’t wait to tell him and didn't know
how she could wait even a minute longer.
His key turned in the lock. One look
at his face and her dreams shattered.
‘The firm has gone bust.’ Luke shook as he told her.
She held out her arms, her news would have to
wait.
Word Count: 503
Great characterisation here. I feel like I'm involved in their lives and want to read on!
ReplyDeleteI have read enough of your stories to know there's some surprising twist coming. I've begun trying to guess. I missed this one by a mile! I thought for sure he was going to be a jerk, married maybe.
ReplyDeleteOh man! What's the big news? A baby? :) That was my guess. Great job, Sally.
ReplyDelete(By the way, I love the name Luke.)
Oh! Dang it. Is she pregnant?
ReplyDeleteHugs,
Kathy M.