PHOTO PROMPT - Copyright Ted Strutz
Here are my 100 words to go with the above photo prompt:
THE DREAM
Yes,
this is it
We can
do it bit by bit
Jenny’s
excitement was infectious
But
her husband was more cautious
Look
at the electrics, that needs fixing
The
building works will take us until spring
Ben
was frowning, his brows knotted together
He
could see months of work, stress and pressure
Jenny
hugged him fiercely, can't you see my darling
This
is our dream home; there will be no more slumming
No
more making-do, no more next month, next year
This
is it, our dreams can come true
Ben
capitulated and didn’t resist
As he
accepted Jenny’s sweet kiss.
Word count: 100
That was sweet! I also like the "shape" of the poem - it looks like a tree, don't know if that was intentional. :)
ReplyDeleteI keep meaning to get involved with these fiction bloghops and not getting around to it, but I could get on board with this one. I love writing flash fiction!
Me again. Who hosts this bloghop so I can join in?
ReplyDeleteHi Nick, here is a link to Rochelle's website
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sorry for leaving it off. It will be great to see you here. 100 words can be challenging to say all you want to say!
Very sweet. I'm guessing light bulb for the shape of the poem?
ReplyDeleteSally, I've nominated you for an award over at my blog.
ReplyDeleteOh dear, renovations always look easy, but never are. LOL
ReplyDeleteLovely piece!
love the shape, Sally.
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