Write…Edit…Publish,
December
bloghop.You are welcome to submit any of the following – flash fiction, poetry,
non-fiction or playscripts to a word count of 1,000 words – artwork and photographs
accompanied by your written inspiration in creating your work/s. ..
Here is my fictional
story
ONE DAY OF THE YEAR
‘Tell me again why we are hosting
Christmas with all your family.’ Dan’s
arms were folded across his chest; his legs apart, his feet firmly placed on
the ground. His stance was as aggressive
as I’ve ever known him.
‘Well,’ I began looking at his
angry face. The scowl was ferocious, his
eyes glittering hard with anger. ‘What
do you want to do instead?’ I’d put the
ball firmly back in his court. I didn't
have to explain it again to him. Every
year was the same, all the family came to us, we cooked the big dinner with all
the trimmings, we pulled crackers, wore the silly hats, told the silly jokes
out of the crackers, drank the wine, cleared up and then distributed the
presents from under the tree to the recipients.
Then we had a cup of tea and then we started all over again with laying
the table ready for high tea.
I was fed up with this argument
every year. Christmas was
traditional. Family came over and then
they went home after eating all our food and drinking all our booze.
‘We could go away.’ The stance was still there but his eyes had
relaxed a little bit.
I nodded. I looked at the pain in his eyes. One day I would give in and do what he
wanted. One day it would be too late to
have a traditional Christmas. One day we
would be on our own when the kids wouldn’t want to come round and we’d have to
go to their houses. One day out of 365
days.
One day of the year that
everybody’s hopes were high, emotions became fraught with cooking turkeys, pigs
in blankets, roast potatoes, vegetables, chestnut stuffing, sausage stuffing,
vegetables, roast beef, two gravy boats and feeling stuffed then forcing down
Christmas pudding or sherry trifle, cheese and biscuits on offer, coffee and
mints or a liqueur to round off the meal.
‘Scotland maybe or a luxury cruise,’
Dan wouldn’t let it go. ‘A winter
wonderland, snow in the Highlands, roaring log fires. It would be good for us.’ He wasn't going to plead but he would make
it seem romantic.
I tried to stifle my
laughter. I had a vision of Dan in a
kilt, Dan trying to play the bagpipes, Dan eating haggis (yuk). I could probably enjoy it. In fact I know I would enjoy it if I could
get rid of the guilt feelings of leaving my family over the festive period.
‘We could take in New Year as
well. That would be a sight to see, New
Year’s Eve in Scotland. What do you say,
darling?’ Dan opened his arms and held
out his hands, palms up, inviting me in to his body.
I went willingly enough. We embraced with all the love we had for each
other. I disengaged myself from his
arms and walked into the kitchen.
‘OK Dan. Next year we will go away, just you and
me.’
I started opening cupboards,
gathering up flour, sugar and mincemeat to make mince pies. From the corner of my eye I saw him begin to
relax.
Christmas day came, the sun shone
brightly, there was a nip in the air but no snow. Dan and I worked hard all morning, shoving
the turkey in the oven, peeling potatoes ready for roasting, peeling and
chopping vegetables and putting the Christmas pudding on to steam for a good
four or five hours.
Midday the first flurry of guests
arrived. Coats were taken and hung,
kisses exchanged, drinks in hands and conversation started to flow as the
excited kids told grandparents what they had received in their stockings.
Food and drink was consumed,
dishes cleared, wrapping paper littered the lounge floor. A deep sigh of relief could be felt in the
room. No arguments, no presents
disliked, all the kids behaved as did the grown-ups.
High tea, gammon, salad, cold
meats, pickles, salad, cheese board, chocolate blancmange rabbits, mince pies,
sausage rolls and more alcohol passed everybody’s lips. Paper plates, plastic cutlery thrown away, a
nice easy meal to clear up.
Sitting around the cleared dining
room table the cards came out, Uno was played and enjoyed with some entering
into the competitive spirit of the game more so than others. The little ones tried to play with a lot of
help from the adults.
Eventually the couples began to
leave, thanks were given for a lovely time, the house emptied and Dan and I
were left on our own.
‘I thought that went very
well. One of the best Christmas day’s we’ve
had so far.’ I grinned at Dan as I tried
to cuddle him. His body was stiff with
contained rage.
‘You didn't hear what your mother
said, then?’
‘Oh don't start, Dan. Let’s just go to bed and we can rest and
chill out tomorrow.’
Dan harrumphed and started
turning all the lights out and making the house secure.
Another year over, another traditional
Christmas saved. So next year might be different
for us, I hadn't forgotten my promise to Dan.
Next year we would start some new traditions just for ourselves.
Word Count: 866
Great Christmas story, Sally! I found and am now following your blog via the Write Edit Publish Blog hop. You can find and follow my blog at http://lorenmathisbooks.blogspot.com/
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Really nice, Sally. I like the part about the adults behaving themselves. It's so true that sometimes they act worse than the kids! :)
ReplyDeleteHey Sally I love this. You bring out the conflict felt by many about the toll Christmas preparations can have on us. Dan would approve of my husband planning this holiday we're on ~ miss 2 children's birthdays and Christmas and New Year...we'll have a lot of making up to do when we get home.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your insightful and entertaining story for the fest.Sally.
Denise
I want to know what her mother said! :P
ReplyDeleteMe too, what did the mother say? Made me think of our Christmases now. Kids no longer at home, but it's the one time we might all be together so we take it year by year. One year we went off to France, this one we're all going to be in North Carolina! Can't wait to see them, it's been too long!
ReplyDeleteMe three! Seriously what did she say? This is such a lovely story, so evocative and filled with all the joys and potential pitfalls of a family holiday. And all that food talk has me dribbling. Role on Christmas lunch. Thanks for sharing Sally, and Merry Christmas.
ReplyDeleteGreat story, I know how she felt - just one day of family and being together - overlooking all and moving forward! Loved it! My hubby's the same way. I'm the traditionalist - the Christmas junkie!
ReplyDeleteWishing you a very lovely holiday season!
Dang, I was hoping to know what her mother said :) A lovely story Sally. But, sometimes its good to make new traditions.
ReplyDelete......dhole
Hope they do go to Scotland for the next! Great story, and rings true, traditions have their price. Happy New Year!
ReplyDeleteI can only imagine what the mother said! No wonder Christmas always seemed so much magical as a child. All the celebrating without the self-induced dramatics of adults.
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice story. I bet that her mother will have a lot to say about them being gone next year.
ReplyDeleteHope that you had a great Christmas, and Happy 2014 to you!
Kathy M.
Oh boy, family holidays can certainly be complicated! Nice piece.
ReplyDeleteI hope you get to watch loads of tennis!