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WEP's November blogfest, SHARING!
THE BIG DAY
Three
weeks to arrange a wedding wasn't as hard as people said it would be. Some people assumed that she was pregnant so
it was a shotgun wedding, as if that would happen these days. Nobody in their right minds had to get
married in this day and age, albeit some cultures still used arranged marriages
but mostly in modern times people married for love.
The
bridal shop had a large range of magnificent dresses from frothy, bouffant
styles with yards and yards of lace, tight bodices, revealing strapless dresses
that didn't suit most ladies but who still suffered and squeezed themselves
into tight corsets after months of trying to become the right shape, denying
themselves meals and treats, suffering torture and torment of hours at the
gym.
Stella
mentally shrugged her shoulders, she was the size and shape she was, three
weeks wasn’t going to make a difference no matter what she did. She wasn't ungainly, in fact she had a
wonderful 20 year old figure, her fiancée had never complained.
Sharing
her day was becoming bigger than Stella and Rob had thought it would be. Rob’s family was small, he was an only child
of a single mother and there was a cousin and her family and an aunt and her
husband, so for his side that was about it.
They could make up the numbers by inviting their friends on to the guest
list.
Stella’s
family, now that was turning into a nightmare.
Her mum insisted that you could only invite this person if that person
was invited and if you didn’t invite that person then you couldn’t invite that
one. Stella said she had wanted a small,
intimate wedding. Her father then put
his foot down and said if he was paying for it then they had to invite the
people her mother said.
The
acceptances and responses came flooding in, everybody accepted. Stella was going to share her big day with
hundreds of people and all she really wanted to do was share it with her
husband-to-be.
She
wanted to share her life with Rob, share the ups and downs and share bringing
up children, share joys and sorrows. She
wanted to share her life until Rob was bald and she had grey hairs, cleverly
coloured. She wanted to share the
pleasure of seeing their own children have children, enjoy the company of their
grandchildren; this is what Stella wanted to share.
So
in the grand scheme of things, as her grandfather was wont to say, what did one
day actually mean? Yes but it should be
HER day, not anybody else’s but Stella caved in as she always did. She went with the flow.
She
was the one who would walk down the aisle on her father’s arm; she was the one
who would be ‘given away’ as though she was a chattel. She was the one who would not say ‘obey’ in
her vows. She was quite willing to love
and cherish Rob, in sickness and in health, for richer or poorer but she would
not ‘obey’ him. They would share
decisions and he knew that and was quite willing to do that or at least accepted
the theory of that idea.
The
special day dawned, cold, wet, and miserable; this did not help her wedding day
nerves. Her mum told her the old country
adage, ‘rain before seven, dry by eleven.’
True to form, a few minutes after eleven the sun started to shyly peak
through the clouds as a weak September sun spread its warmth and seeped through
the ozone layer and to dry up the pavements and gardens.
Stella’s
brother drove her mother to the church in his car, shining and gleaming after
being through the car wash that morning.
The aunts, uncles, cousins, grandparents and spurious relatives, who had
popped up out of the woodwork, were all waiting for her at the lych gate, its
gabled roof covered in moss and lichen.
Albert
waited in the living room, fidgeting with his collar and tie. He would never admit to his daughter that he
was feeling slightly nervous, he had to be strong and let his little girl go
and be loved and adored by a man other than him. He harrumphed and cleared his throat as he
heard Stella descending down the stairs.
A
vision of white loveliness floated past his face. His daughter was beautiful. She was a gorgeous blushing bride. Stella took his arm as they made their way
to the waiting beribboned bridal car.
Three
bridesmaids helped Stella out of the car, arranging her dress around her and
tweaking her veil. Tessa, her best
friend, whispered, ‘are you sure?’
Stella breathed a deep sigh, her blue eyes glittering with emotion and
nodded.
The
vicar greeted the small retinue at the large studded oak doors to the church;
they stood just inside the vestibule as he uttered some encouraging words, then
he made his way to the altar.
The
organ started playing the Wedding March, so traditional for the white
bride. Her arm was shaking; Albert
patted her hand that was threaded through the crook of his elbow with just the
white lace gloves showing. They started
the walk down the aisle.
Stella
smelt the oldness of the stones of the church, she inhaled the woodiness of the
pews, as she travelled further down the gangway she could smell new clothes,
perfume and aftershave.
They
stopped at the steps to the altar, her father took a step back as did Rob’s
best man. Rob turned and looked at her,
his green eyes full of admiration and love, a slight wink to her as they both
turned their faces towards the vicar.
The
bells rang out; the photographer arranged the bridal group and snapped shot
after shot. He managed to get the large
group photograph aligned to his satisfaction, the birds sang and the sun was
still shining.
Word Count:
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Lovely piece. Although weddings are for the couple to share their love, they are also sharing their special day with everyone who attends. I loved the part where Stella was thinking of all the things she wants to share with Rob. I found myself wishing for someone to share the same things with. :)
ReplyDeleteThe wedding is all about sharing isn't it! Lovely, as always!
ReplyDeleteSweet! Sharing lives also means sharing families - for better or worse. :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely Sally. Took me back to my own wedding in an old church. Stella is so sweet trying to please everyone. And I'm so glad the sun came out for her on her special day. I wonder what married life has in store for Stella?.
ReplyDeleteLovely Sally. Took me back to my own wedding in an old church. Stella is so sweet trying to please everyone. And I'm so glad the sun came out for her on her special day. I wonder what married life has in store for Stella?.
ReplyDeleteA lovely description of a wedding, one that a lot of people wished they had experienced.
ReplyDeleteThis is really beautiful. I understand how Stella feels. You brought back a lot of memories.
ReplyDeleteHappy weekend!
Weddings, oh boy... I thoroughly enjoyed ours but I totally understand why some people elope. It is, as you suggest, just one day out of a life. The marriage is the important part.
ReplyDeleteSally, this was beautiful. When the bride was asked, 'Are you sure?' I thought there was going to be a twist, and she was going to abandon all those unwanted guests at the church. However, weddings are for sharing, usually, and I'm glad she went through with it and made her parents and everybody else happy. Her happiness will continue through to growing old together, I hope (if this was taken from real life!)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your lovely story, Sally. Always a delight when you share.
Denise
I think you captured the wedding and the nerves well. I sometimes watch a show about brides. You can learn a lot about human nature by observing the reactions of people during stressful times.
ReplyDeleteNancy
Over the years, families expand, grow bigger, and due to financial constraints, it does become difficult to include every family member in celebration events, like weddings/anniversaries etc. Who do you invite? Who do you leave out? This is a very real and universal issue. It's tough.
ReplyDeleteCan you blame couples who decide to elope?
I like the way you showcased Stella's thoughts, with regards to the traditional wedding vows, and how she envisaged their sharing of important decisions, as opposed to the age old word "obey"...
Beautifully described. I particularly liked her thoughts on what she actually wanted to share as opposed to what she was ending up sharing. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI like this Sally. Nice feel good piece that reaches out to the reader. You cover the minefield before the day very well. Maybe for once, one of the soaps can take a lesson from this story, instead of the usual cardboard cut-out trash conflict scenarios they throw at the viewer at the last moment in the church. One nice wedding surely wouldn't hurt. Elizabeth Bennett enjoyed hers I''m sure.
ReplyDeleteDidn't know I was attending a wedding today! Thanks for sharing! My daughter is getting married next June, and he's the one with the over-flowing family!
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