Thursday, 3 January 2013

THE BRIDE



http://jfb57.wordpress.com/2012/12/31/100-word-challenge-week71/
100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week#71

The date once again provides the prompt:

…as midnight struck…

That means you have 103 words to produce a creative piece



THE BRIDE

The diamond ring set sparkled on her hand
She had travelled many miles over sea and land
To celebrate Christmas with her friends and family
Her wedding day four days later, elegant and fancy
She felt a twinge of regret but a deep sigh relieved her
There was a question with an unknown answer
One person was missing and she didn’t know what to do
Should she have made advances, was she wrong not to?
Stupidly, stubbornly she’d burned her bridges several years ago
She had achieved her dream, she was the blushing bride
As midnight struck she walked proudly by his side.

6 comments:

  1. Lovely use of the prompt Sally.

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  2. Lovely use of the prompt Sally.

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  3. I have a feeling that someone who is missing is about to come back into her life and create a disturbance.

    Nice piece.

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  4. Oh, one should always make advances. After all, he can only say no... :-)

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