tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post8284681219396786627..comments2023-10-25T03:20:20.953-07:00Comments on Sally's Scribbles: Mary-JaneSallyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-89048545201223915812013-07-12T07:17:58.614-07:002013-07-12T07:17:58.614-07:00Oh wow- that took a really surpising turn at the e...Oh wow- that took a really surpising turn at the end! And now I understand why she was having such sad thoughts the night after a lovely event- that seemed sort-of out nowhere when i first read it but then the end brought it together nicely. Bevimushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924337684790883853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-4215047222158063592013-07-11T07:21:52.086-07:002013-07-11T07:21:52.086-07:00So very tempting. Maybe I'll post on this next...So very tempting. Maybe I'll post on this next week.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-78668121792303387212013-07-10T09:48:38.648-07:002013-07-10T09:48:38.648-07:00I really enjoyed this, Sally. I was swept along wi...I really enjoyed this, Sally. I was swept along with Mary-Jane's surroundings, her memories and her sadness.<br /><br />Although sad, the ending was well done.Heather Muskhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06401981352369837021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-52742462505470490292013-07-09T15:34:42.475-07:002013-07-09T15:34:42.475-07:00Awwww,I love this! It's so sad, but you captur...Awwww,I love this! It's so sad, but you captured it really wonderfully! Good job!Nicole Pyleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06920135146911951755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-63757176927233094242013-07-09T15:24:09.461-07:002013-07-09T15:24:09.461-07:00I join in with this blog-hop as a point of exercis...I join in with this blog-hop as a point of exercise. For some reason there are a few people who like what I write but as is often the case I am my own biggest critic. Reading this brings it home to me exactly why that is. I am a fraud in the respect I have very little imagination and draw heavily on life experience. Like others in the blog hop this post seems so effortless, or natural. I am envious.jphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14366756099517322071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-33152338771912800032013-07-09T12:23:13.056-07:002013-07-09T12:23:13.056-07:00Lovely story about the ups and downs of life. Nice...Lovely story about the ups and downs of life. Nice work tying in the photo!Danahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16272293468239097754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-23891902562415137482013-07-09T11:27:24.406-07:002013-07-09T11:27:24.406-07:00Aww. :( I liked how even though the beginning was ...Aww. :( I liked how even though the beginning was a sort of happy start with the surprise party you built in the suspense of sadness without going overboard with it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12146136846875431598noreply@blogger.com