tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post5246010046630906696..comments2023-10-25T03:20:20.953-07:00Comments on Sally's Scribbles: MY BEDSallyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-32235674841709387622013-03-29T16:03:56.880-07:002013-03-29T16:03:56.880-07:00That's great!That's great! netablogshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03701837355683136230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-54992096297608034642013-03-22T05:56:18.895-07:002013-03-22T05:56:18.895-07:00Scary! I want to know what happens next. ;)Scary! I want to know what happens next. ;)Danahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16272293468239097754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-6695026289420882422013-03-21T14:41:19.386-07:002013-03-21T14:41:19.386-07:00Oh great ending Sally. Overall an atmosphere of fe...Oh great ending Sally. Overall an atmosphere of fear.Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-42848754907792428642013-03-14T12:01:20.934-07:002013-03-14T12:01:20.934-07:00I wouldn't want to be in that bed. I felt a bi...I wouldn't want to be in that bed. I felt a bit uncomfortable, I hope that was your intention :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10204165708189660644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-20756739517055922532013-03-14T08:36:42.176-07:002013-03-14T08:36:42.176-07:00Well done! I am not generally a fan of poetry, but...Well done! I am not generally a fan of poetry, but I quite enjoy poetic prose. I like your use of language here.<br />- Alicia AudreyAlicia Audreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00281607401060737431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-2604448994231824252013-03-14T02:36:51.393-07:002013-03-14T02:36:51.393-07:00Enjoyed the writing Sally. Good lines in there to ...Enjoyed the writing Sally. Good lines in there to hint at an edge and I liked the imagery and language. The 'sunshine' words that you use are the perfect foil for the menace that lingers below. Keithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15204149912245253542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-5428036962217415832013-03-13T15:56:26.198-07:002013-03-13T15:56:26.198-07:00Creepie guest...
But good writing!Creepie guest...<br /><br />But good writing!Nas https://www.blogger.com/profile/08341843048288374472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-31396376729394322192013-03-13T07:34:27.498-07:002013-03-13T07:34:27.498-07:00Eerie... Sounds like the worst case of guest on hi...Eerie... Sounds like the worst case of guest on his way.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com