tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post6287994950655183557..comments2023-10-25T03:20:20.953-07:00Comments on Sally's Scribbles: Enough is Enough Sallyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-67945343526828375782016-01-29T14:02:54.130-08:002016-01-29T14:02:54.130-08:00I loved the way you told your story! Thanks for pa...I loved the way you told your story! Thanks for participating this week. Hope to see you in Week #5. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-71019053946035746042016-01-27T21:09:14.717-08:002016-01-27T21:09:14.717-08:00*much (sometimes I really 'love' the autoc...*much (sometimes I really 'love' the autocorrect)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-38553645213956978252016-01-27T21:07:10.666-08:002016-01-27T21:07:10.666-08:00I really enjoyed reading this one. It has so much ...I really enjoyed reading this one. It has so much energy, yet so mach sadness at the same time. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-10476575866296155782016-01-26T04:36:43.028-08:002016-01-26T04:36:43.028-08:00You've told the entire story of this family in...You've told the entire story of this family in just these 200 words!<br />I like the repetition of the first line.dralimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406990786992208063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-31599044049253903612016-01-25T22:08:16.154-08:002016-01-25T22:08:16.154-08:00Very powerful poem. I liked the repeating lines. I...Very powerful poem. I liked the repeating lines. I enjoyed how in your poem/story you talked about it not only the bad relationship effecting the mother and father but also the boy, his school, and later his feelings in regard to his parents. Sad and powerful writing! Mandibelle16https://www.blogger.com/profile/13560087719498316954noreply@blogger.com