tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post5657137036849353737..comments2023-10-25T03:20:20.953-07:00Comments on Sally's Scribbles: WAITING - SUNDAY PHOTO FICTIONSallyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-25060966353971185722016-11-29T09:37:08.657-08:002016-11-29T09:37:08.657-08:00Great building of anticipation and the last two li...Great building of anticipation and the last two lines turn it on its head. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-50115596581974099032016-11-29T05:31:56.663-08:002016-11-29T05:31:56.663-08:00Is the wait worth it? Her anguish beautifully cap...Is the wait worth it? Her anguish beautifully captured. NEEL ANIL PANICKERhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02275767058712033281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-92091076248088507632016-11-29T04:55:50.589-08:002016-11-29T04:55:50.589-08:00Liked this piece very much.Liked this piece very much.Dahliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05936423022434911077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-84203767567263040122016-11-29T01:22:34.032-08:002016-11-29T01:22:34.032-08:00That took a change of direction. From what you exp...That took a change of direction. From what you expect to be a wife or lover, turns out to be a mistress. Good story, and it flows really well.Sunday Photo Fictionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06539583374047458382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-31770944836215723942016-11-28T15:51:52.433-08:002016-11-28T15:51:52.433-08:00Very different take on the prompt, Sally, well don...Very different take on the prompt, Sally, well done.C. E. Ayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08282147805843608053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-37665412467307488072016-11-28T08:22:14.840-08:002016-11-28T08:22:14.840-08:00Very interesting! So lonely all day long waiting f...Very interesting! So lonely all day long waiting for that brief time with him. Makes you wonder if it is all worth it?<br /><br />bettybettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06323135450742337670noreply@blogger.com