tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post5281665046343693785..comments2023-10-25T03:20:20.953-07:00Comments on Sally's Scribbles: THE SCHOOL TRIPSallyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-73754365081945076572015-07-26T07:33:36.887-07:002015-07-26T07:33:36.887-07:00Good story with a tragic twist at the end. Well do...Good story with a tragic twist at the end. Well done, Sally. I hope she goes to a relative or someone interested in continuing her education. :) --- SuzanneP.S. Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05115966559427725610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-53237076546217347462015-07-23T08:10:44.576-07:002015-07-23T08:10:44.576-07:00Oh my.... so sad, wasn't expecting that! Excel...Oh my.... so sad, wasn't expecting that! Excellent take on the prompt and very effective story!!Deborah Ratliffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18402427322647876417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-60730145404683837782015-07-22T03:38:00.416-07:002015-07-22T03:38:00.416-07:00Well dang, Sally. You're in a morbid mood. Thi...Well dang, Sally. You're in a morbid mood. This story reminds me of so many happy photos of relatives who died in war. Whenever I look at them, I think, "On this day they were happy but in just a short time they will be dead." Tragedy exists in seconds.Wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17863357756727783017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-57003044646035026242015-07-21T13:38:48.700-07:002015-07-21T13:38:48.700-07:00Oh no! That hit hard, quite a shock. If it is the ...Oh no! That hit hard, quite a shock. If it is the worst news, I hope her parents' example of instilling knowledge will see her through.Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-4279303577272447692015-07-21T09:55:26.288-07:002015-07-21T09:55:26.288-07:00Only ten and all alone. I hope her parents efforts...Only ten and all alone. I hope her parents efforts prove useful to her while in the years to come. Just a heartbreaking story. Well done!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-47001101244738646742015-07-21T09:46:50.798-07:002015-07-21T09:46:50.798-07:00That's a sad ending....such great parents are ...That's a sad ending....such great parents are not meant to be lost. :) Nice story that pulls us into the world of the little heroine.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-39992923821067821002015-07-21T08:04:38.735-07:002015-07-21T08:04:38.735-07:00Brutal ending! I was not expecting that at all Sa...Brutal ending! I was not expecting that at all Sally! Nicely done. Thank you for writing for the <a rel="nofollow">Mondays Finish the Story</a> challenge and be well... ^..^Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04036472765583037689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-90749457645461630642015-07-21T06:05:37.716-07:002015-07-21T06:05:37.716-07:00Such a sad ending! Great story Sally! I feel bad f...Such a sad ending! Great story Sally! I feel bad for Alicia.Priceless Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08527831752045269161noreply@blogger.com