tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post5275784858275346198..comments2023-10-25T03:20:20.953-07:00Comments on Sally's Scribbles: THE DECISION - Friday FictioneersSallyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-83646914071928312532015-05-18T21:43:25.518-07:002015-05-18T21:43:25.518-07:00Not easy to do Sally but you've got so much de...Not easy to do Sally but you've got so much description and emotion here. Well done you!<br /><br />Denise :-)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-40503885095906839472015-05-18T02:15:56.852-07:002015-05-18T02:15:56.852-07:00Dear Sally,
Not an easy decision.
Shalom,
Roch...Dear Sally, <br /><br />Not an easy decision.<br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-88675463606822150122015-05-15T13:57:18.376-07:002015-05-15T13:57:18.376-07:00Having to give up after so many years, what a sad ...Having to give up after so many years, what a sad decision. The character's feelings are very clear, and the description brings me right into the scene. Great story.Gah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782476711011046782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-46368714213376290002015-05-15T13:48:11.198-07:002015-05-15T13:48:11.198-07:00Neat story.
AnElephant is a simple soul, and strug...Neat story.<br />AnElephant is a simple soul, and struggles with the punctuation in the first and third sentences.<br />Sorry.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-88775139749899709612015-05-15T10:33:33.777-07:002015-05-15T10:33:33.777-07:00Awesome use of the word constraints :) I really en...Awesome use of the word constraints :) I really enjoyed itAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14028993309576383058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-24438711040156187192015-05-15T05:24:31.203-07:002015-05-15T05:24:31.203-07:00We are losing so many family farms to corporate fa...We are losing so many family farms to corporate farming. You really drove that home here. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-27503096329233845612015-05-14T07:17:11.315-07:002015-05-14T07:17:11.315-07:00I'm guessing he's going to sell up and mov...I'm guessing he's going to sell up and move to the city. Very sad after all those years.dralimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16406990786992208063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-2628016241721069782015-05-14T03:36:44.006-07:002015-05-14T03:36:44.006-07:00"A season of pessimism"-- says it all!"A season of pessimism"-- says it all! Wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17863357756727783017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-33059579839762369182015-05-14T02:36:14.061-07:002015-05-14T02:36:14.061-07:00The end of an era. So sad.
Rosey PinkertonThe end of an era. So sad.<br /><a href="http://roseypinkerton.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Rosey Pinkerton</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06494008320581408004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-65080669191032872812015-05-13T16:14:30.595-07:002015-05-13T16:14:30.595-07:00Nice picture prompt. I always over-write. Hard to ...Nice picture prompt. I always over-write. Hard to tell a story in 100 words. You did well Sally.dolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-25051807203931918742015-05-13T08:11:04.810-07:002015-05-13T08:11:04.810-07:00Very tight and succinct. I can see the brown-ness ...Very tight and succinct. I can see the brown-ness and feel the drought. I'm not a fan of the dryness or the heat. . .well done!<br />I will check out the site for info on Friday Fictioneers. I'm missing the old WEP prompts. . .D.G. Hudsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06213237734772028645noreply@blogger.com