tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post3518065409861481052..comments2023-10-25T03:20:20.953-07:00Comments on Sally's Scribbles: THE REPORTSallyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-3221175268235146072015-08-05T06:24:40.593-07:002015-08-05T06:24:40.593-07:00Fantastic story and yes, I loved that last line to...Fantastic story and yes, I loved that last line too. It changed the whole story for me. Alison is one tough character and I like her!www.tribalmystic.mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06046844309299336701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-56286751054989197582015-08-04T06:48:20.463-07:002015-08-04T06:48:20.463-07:00Well done..... by the time I finished your descrip...Well done..... by the time I finished your description of the boss, I loathed him. He shouldn't have asked her for her opinion. Great story!!Deborah Ratliffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18402427322647876417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-25972286257199691112015-08-04T06:03:43.716-07:002015-08-04T06:03:43.716-07:00Great line, "he could take that in his pipe a...Great line, "he could take that in his pipe and smoke it." Thoroughly enjoyed! Description of smarmy is perfection!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-27452774704274933632015-08-04T04:21:32.702-07:002015-08-04T04:21:32.702-07:00Love the details bringing the swarmy boss to life ...Love the details bringing the swarmy boss to life and how you added one last detail in the clincher.Wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17863357756727783017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-23723859471739988792015-08-03T20:24:49.258-07:002015-08-03T20:24:49.258-07:00The boss seems to be 'smarmy'.. A differen...The boss seems to be 'smarmy'.. A different take. Like it.Lshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03608500323344095244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-34444938146070176202015-08-03T19:54:13.751-07:002015-08-03T19:54:13.751-07:00Haha, I love the description of this 'smarmy&#...Haha, I love the description of this 'smarmy' character (love the word smarmy, too!). Well done.Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-39883925521577478812015-08-03T08:46:31.049-07:002015-08-03T08:46:31.049-07:00Go Alison! Nice job on using the prompt to create ...Go Alison! Nice job on using the prompt to create something with so much tension between people not even involved in the nightshade's use.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12146136846875431598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-598212929089366132015-08-03T08:10:49.921-07:002015-08-03T08:10:49.921-07:00That is a kool take on this prompt.
Thanks and We...That is a kool take on this prompt.<br /><br />Thanks and Welcome.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-20134951190541433962015-08-03T07:20:05.605-07:002015-08-03T07:20:05.605-07:00Loved the last line Sally! Nicely done. And, the...Loved the last line Sally! Nicely done. And, the description of the boss, very well described as I could see it in my mind's eye. Thanks for writing again for the MFtS Challenge and be well... ^..^Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04036472765583037689noreply@blogger.com