tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post1968390745171603828..comments2023-10-25T03:20:20.953-07:00Comments on Sally's Scribbles: JUST A DREAMSallyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-53297211869242073392013-06-13T08:15:29.685-07:002013-06-13T08:15:29.685-07:00This is an interesting story within a story, both ...This is an interesting story within a story, both with images of pain and foreboding.Wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17863357756727783017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-55666326806704124152013-06-09T11:12:51.651-07:002013-06-09T11:12:51.651-07:00Wow, what a journey. Hate the dentist, and you cau...Wow, what a journey. Hate the dentist, and you caught everything about it that I hate. :)<br />Sad things to happen but going back may not be the best idea. Move on, forward and heal.<br />Great story based on the prompts! Amazing where the mind goes.Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-76017174140903562942013-06-08T06:42:28.015-07:002013-06-08T06:42:28.015-07:00Enjoyed the journey Sally, and really well crafted...Enjoyed the journey Sally, and really well crafted to keep the rhythm, rhyme and interest. I wonder what Juliette's secret is? How does she manage to lose herself for half an hour in a dentist's chair!!<br />There are unanswered questions around the family's demise which you leave nicely for the reader to speculate further on. Keithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15204149912245253542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-4635483219800935562013-06-06T19:56:51.139-07:002013-06-06T19:56:51.139-07:00Love this so much. I got pleasantly immersed in he...Love this so much. I got pleasantly immersed in her dream/story. This has a gentle and sad tone, but there is something beautiful in this. Well done! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-3580496809520397262013-06-06T11:48:26.389-07:002013-06-06T11:48:26.389-07:00I never know where you're going to take us wit...I never know where you're going to take us with your poems, which is one of the many things I like about your pieces. Beautifully done, even with the sad undertones, and yet, I still felt a spark of hope. Elise Fallsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14734537117333738468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-25247031949033696422013-06-05T03:16:00.412-07:002013-06-05T03:16:00.412-07:00Sad - I wonder if it's wise to return to old p...Sad - I wonder if it's wise to return to old pastures and risk opening the wounds afresh. Great journey prompted by the words, though.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-61568659894542417532013-06-04T21:55:01.874-07:002013-06-04T21:55:01.874-07:00Ohhh my mind was drifting with this character as s...Ohhh my mind was drifting with this character as she went along!! You captured her mind state perfectly! I loved this piece!!Nicole Pyleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06920135146911951755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-22917009752184010972013-06-03T21:13:30.986-07:002013-06-03T21:13:30.986-07:00Well done Sally--funny how we each see the picture...Well done Sally--funny how we each see the picture and envision different things. I wouldn't have have thought of a dentist in a million years. ;) Good job.Hygge Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07518356793147594574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-8386096028455646292013-06-03T18:13:27.324-07:002013-06-03T18:13:27.324-07:00Wow- what a dense piece. Felt like meandering thr...Wow- what a dense piece. Felt like meandering through a maze of different emotions. Captured the sense of a mind wandering incredibly well here.Bevimushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924337684790883853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-61931440364325046832013-06-03T06:32:03.809-07:002013-06-03T06:32:03.809-07:00This makes me wonder what happened to her family. ...This makes me wonder what happened to her family. Really lovely, I enjoyed reading it. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12146136846875431598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-34335972396411076312013-06-03T05:59:54.589-07:002013-06-03T05:59:54.589-07:00Ditto to what the others said. Nice work!Ditto to what the others said. Nice work!Danahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16272293468239097754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-12972841945336314472013-06-03T05:13:53.174-07:002013-06-03T05:13:53.174-07:00I enjoyed this story, especially the interweaving ...I enjoyed this story, especially the interweaving of time periods. This format is something I've never thought of trying. Well done.Heather Muskhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06401981352369837021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-92122179588591988382013-06-03T05:06:46.524-07:002013-06-03T05:06:46.524-07:00Love how you started with a modern day visit to th...Love how you started with a modern day visit to the dentist and wove in omens and a family's past. I always enjoy your stories and this one was no exception. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134305700178950506noreply@blogger.com