tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post1018153032847604913..comments2023-10-25T03:20:20.953-07:00Comments on Sally's Scribbles: IN TOO DEEP - WEPSallyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-79397112608995531812018-02-23T21:11:50.050-08:002018-02-23T21:11:50.050-08:00Interesting story. Fun twist on the start of an af...Interesting story. Fun twist on the start of an affair. J Lenni Dornerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07961335286982498158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-41174493411051183532018-02-23T16:48:14.288-08:002018-02-23T16:48:14.288-08:00That last bit of 'should I stay' is someth...That last bit of 'should I stay' is something I have gone through in an earlier relationship. I chose to go and have never regretted it. Risk taking is part of life, and if you don't answer when opportunity knocks, it may never come again. Well done!D.G. Hudsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06213237734772028645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-24836636148090117612018-02-22T10:30:46.678-08:002018-02-22T10:30:46.678-08:00It's reassuring to know that one has a choice ...It's reassuring to know that one has a choice though it can be agonizing making that choice. Being the one to make that choice is important however it turns out. It's empowering and I hope it bodes well for them in the future.<br />Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-63532440586738984892018-02-22T10:30:16.626-08:002018-02-22T10:30:16.626-08:00A well written tale of a budding romance.
from: ...A well written tale of a budding romance. <br /><br />from: christopherscottauthor.wordpress.comChristopher Scott Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08627870625577204377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-72219168082830918772018-02-22T05:57:08.179-08:002018-02-22T05:57:08.179-08:00I enjoyed reading about these characters and enjoy...I enjoyed reading about these characters and enjoyed the hopeful ending you crafted for them. I hope everything goes well for them in the future.L.G. Keltnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07624902347418621283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-69747206550136134412018-02-22T02:25:40.161-08:002018-02-22T02:25:40.161-08:00Mums have such a hard time all round balancing the...Mums have such a hard time all round balancing their own needs with those of their children, don't they? Very well captured in both poetry and prose. A simple but universal story. I hope she finds happiness with Matt.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-23039629452190261582018-02-21T22:09:45.194-08:002018-02-21T22:09:45.194-08:00A single mom invests a lot into a love relationshi...A single mom invests a lot into a love relationship. Package deal indeed. Its easier to jump into Any situation than it is to rectify and risk all again with another.<br /><br />A very lovely story Sally.dolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-21056484707364644542018-02-21T21:04:17.205-08:002018-02-21T21:04:17.205-08:00Sally, this is what a single mother hopes for. She...Sally, this is what a single mother hopes for. She wants love but feels it's more difficult with a child. I'm glad she made the choice. She was never going to be happy with Harry. This would make a lovely romance novel. It has all the elements.<br /><br />Thanks for posting to WEP!<br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-16516422271928367112018-02-21T19:42:45.776-08:002018-02-21T19:42:45.776-08:00Glad this was a happy ending. I was a little worri...Glad this was a happy ending. I was a little worried there for a bit. It's nice to see a story about someone with a child finding new love. Good story. Toi Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493934864387695248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-48199494282075573512018-02-21T16:43:16.661-08:002018-02-21T16:43:16.661-08:00Many who won't date others with kids. Hopefull...Many who won't date others with kids. Hopefully she gets ahead drama free.<br /><br />The fear sure began and then faded away as the heart came to have its say.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-7344912131157357872018-02-21T14:23:10.285-08:002018-02-21T14:23:10.285-08:00A leap of faith I’d say
From a look in a lift that...A leap of faith I’d say<br />From a look in a lift that day<br />To stop one for another<br />To easy does she sway<br />When another comes along<br />Will she sing the same song<br />desk49https://www.blogger.com/profile/05795159954019523527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-84017891754595549312018-02-21T11:25:43.828-08:002018-02-21T11:25:43.828-08:00You described very well the pressure a working mot...You described very well the pressure a working mother feels to get to daycare on time and at first I was worried she wasn't going to pick up her daughter. It could be hard to find men who would accept a woman with a child and I always like hearing about men who do. Deborah Druckerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05649396302648104610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-7796305933663422892018-02-21T11:23:00.939-08:002018-02-21T11:23:00.939-08:00Nice story, Sally, simple and yet deep. I hope she...Nice story, Sally, simple and yet deep. I hope she will find a better life with Matt. There is a promise in the air.Olga Godimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00358026814685611301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-66246171906334468262018-02-21T08:50:30.520-08:002018-02-21T08:50:30.520-08:00Hi Sally - excellent ... loved it and so true to l...Hi Sally - excellent ... loved it and so true to life ... I just hope she had an easy get away and was able to live happily ever after with her daughter and new man ... <br /><br />Loved the way you set it out too - the two parts and then the poem ... really good - cheers HilaryHilary Melton-Butcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596532480645510678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-10470968854683681462018-02-21T07:56:58.863-08:002018-02-21T07:56:58.863-08:00Lovely! I really love the poetic ending, and the w...Lovely! I really love the poetic ending, and the way it was filled with such hope. Especially as I'm a paranoid and feared another. Thank you for the happy one!!!!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-596586419077019479.post-86007011748691933452018-02-21T04:04:45.218-08:002018-02-21T04:04:45.218-08:00I am glad she says yes. It sounds as if her life w...I am glad she says yes. It sounds as if her life was miserable and her daughter's also. Love the way you bring out the dichotomy in her mind about staying or going in the closing poem.<br />Shalom aleichem,<br />Pat G<br />Pat Garciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04204650731843984192noreply@blogger.com